Question

Can anyone help me with my resume? Maybe you can point out grammar errors. Any critique would be much appreciated. THANKS!

Answer 1

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Answer 2

From what I saw it`s all good.

Answer 3

What you have is good, but you also need a cover letter.
Also, I think you should add your references to your resume. ANY employer is going to want them, anyway, so they should just be there.

Answer 4

looks good. Very minor nitpicks:

- Maybe put your name as the first thing, above the personal details?
- "Yearbook" and "Web Design" - maybe a couple of words about your contribution to each? Eg, "collated" or "managed" or "web design, involving liaison with ...."
- "Grade received" is not aligned on the two lines. Maybe use a table to fix it if it can't be fixed with spacings. This might just be how it appears on my system though!
- Excess space after "patrons" in "Miscellaneous" section, and before "tending".
- "Follow ups" should perhaps be "Follow-ups".
- I don't know what "VE" is - maybe expand the acronym?
- "Distribution of materials" - excess space after "of"
- "Organizing and filing important documents", I'd maybe re-word it to be similar to the other points: "Organization of important documents".
- Use fullstops after some of your lists, maybe.
- Maybe change the "Skills" bits into phrases? The /s make it hard to read.
- Use same bulletpoint style throughout.
- You could perhaps make the document "Justified", which can look professional. maybe give it a go and see if you think it gives the right impression?

IMO "References available on request" is fine. References would only need to be checked when the CVs had been sifted and a shortlist generated, so it shouldn't be a disadvantage. Having everything on one page is valuable in that respect.

I know this is a bit of a list, but they're things I've only noticed because I've been looking carefully for them! The CV is good though, and good luck to you with your job applications.

Answer 5

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