Question

Happiness
I'm what fills your eyes when there is snow outside.
Happiness is my name
I am what fills your brain when your new pet is named.
Happiness is my name
I am what you fell when your wound has healed.
Happiness is my name
I am what makes your smile a complete mile when you finish that pile of work.

I am not to stay. So you should give me away.
And decide to make someones day. But i will always comeback never leave so you will still be able to breath.

Answer 1

And plz dont comment i am posting another poem

Answer 2

This next one i am posting i like better and the first one needs more work.

Answer 3

Anger
I Burn in you eyes after every time he lies.
Let me out i say.
I cloud your vision with smoke every time they joke.
Let me out i say.
I Blanket all other feelings when the pain beats healing.
Let me out i say.
I am who clenches your fist once the insults are never missed.
Let me out i say.
I am who stands you up faster after being knocked down.
Let me out i say.
Then comes the day that respect is turned the other way.
Let me out i say.
And you unleash it all hurting everyone in your way...

Answer 4

I lovee them :)

Answer 5

I have one outta 25 comments..

Answer 6

;P hold onn ;P

Answer 7

I LOVE THIS. You are a wonderful writer.

Answer 8

Thank you

Answer 9

2/25 comments

Answer 10

awesomeness

Answer 11

thx

Answer 12

It sounds like a song<3

Answer 13

lol

Answer 14

Good Job ^_^

Answer 15

Commented :P

Answer 16

thanx

Answer 17

5/25 a fourth there

Answer 18

If i am counting right....

Answer 19

I like these Wolfboy, I would encourage you to post more :)

Answer 20

Can I point one mistake here? the last word is breathe.

Answer 21

Yea XD i noticed lol

Answer 22

7/25!!!

Answer 23

It is really good. I think you should post those poems!

Answer 24

Well i need 25 comments to do so

Answer 25

Because then enough people will like em

Answer 26

for me to post the others

Answer 27

what if you count how many medals you are getting?

Answer 28

And thanx the the people who commented already

Answer 29

You got 5 already

Answer 30

8

Answer 31

Plz comment if you want more poems guys. I need 25 different people two comment

Answer 32

If you look on the left there are five people viewing this, so it has to be good. I didn't get this much attention to my poem.

Answer 33

oops seven

Answer 34

8

Answer 35

8 comments?

Answer 36

Well v if you want more then coypie and paste this url in chat boxes and yes 8/25

Answer 37

AND a bunch of them are mods so it must be good ;P

Answer 38

And yes i cannot type XD

Answer 39

If everyone who has viewed my poem so far typed a comment i would have already posted my next two poems.

Answer 40

Good work @Wolfboy

Answer 41

Interesting

Answer 42

Thanx ash

Answer 43

10/25

Answer 44

noice bro

Answer 45

Thx dim

Answer 46

Hey, Dim. Lol

Answer 47

think about 25-30 Different people viewed this by now...

Answer 48

maybe, I am trying to help lol

Answer 49

come on, use your medals as comments, they are better, you know! You get bigger smartscore!

Answer 50

Thanx for trying but it is up to the people who like this poem and would like more to comment.

Answer 51

Its Really Nice :) @Wolfboy

Answer 52

Thank u

Answer 53

thats what? 14/25 or somthin?

Answer 54

13/25

Answer 55

Thanx to the people who tried to get comments but i guess not a lot of people like them

Answer 56

the poems

Answer 57

No offense, Wolfboy, but I think you might be caring a little too much about what people think of your poems. We OpenStudiers are concerned with other people, as well, so not everyone is going to leave a comment about your poems. I do like both of these poems, and I wish that you would continue to post, even if not many people say their opinion about them. Remember - you can't go through life looking for praise. If you're searching mostly for a critical view of your poems, then I would suggest not being so pushy about them. You're posts are not more important than anyone else's. :) I'm not trying to be rude, but I don't think it's very nice of you to act as though no one cares about your poems. Most of the people in life will not give their opinion about what others do, so you can't assume that they do or don't like something. Next time, I would just be patient and bump your poems, periodically. If you don't get enough feedback, on OpenStudy, I would suggest trying a different site, to see if you can get more comments. Also, remember that not as many people are in the writing section, as they are in some other sections (like math, etc.). I truly wish you all the best in writing your poems! I think you have great promise! :) Keep up the good work! =)

Answer 58

I am just looking for enough people to like them because I do not really like sharing them. But i will post them if i get FEEDBACK i dont care if it is saying that i it really bad and i should never post it. I am not "Looking for praise" i just am not going to share my poems unless i know people will like them and leave feedback. That is all.

Answer 59

Besides all people have to do is type in the word cool or type in a period and click post

Answer 60

Because believe it or not i do not like sharing these i am sharing these because other people like them.

Answer 61

So if they type in a period, then it would show they don't care about your poems. How could you know? They might not like it, but if people give medals or become your fan, then they probably like it.

Answer 62

I have to go, bye!

Answer 63

cya

Answer 64

I understand. I think that "performance anxiety" affects us all. :) Try not to be too nervous or critical of yourself and your poems. I know that it can be a little nerve-wracking to get others opinions or show your work, but remember - others are usually going to be interested, in a positive way, about your work (especially on OpenStudy :) - I've found most of the people, here, to be very kind and helpful). Try to work on building your confidence about showing your work (I know that this is a very hard skill to accomplish). I think you'd be surprised at how gaining confidence in this small area of life will spread to and affect the other areas of your life for the positive. Good luck! :)

Answer 65

Hey guys i am posting another poem right now this poem is very special to me so let me type it in before you say anything

Answer 66

CLOSE IT BEFORE MY ANNOUCEMENT BOX ESPLODES!!!!!!!!!

Answer 67

Disguise
I am the book judged by its cover
It’s contents not read.

On the cover you see a smile happy as can be.
But on the inside a face full of pain and misery.

My eyes shine like stars flickering in happiness.
Inside they are closed tears slightly flowing.

My body is fine filled with energy up and running.
But inside its beaten and bruised barely able to move.

My arms are strong and my hug is fair.
But i hold on for life. Trying to find your happiness.

My brain seems smart and on. But wants to be off falling apart from the pain.

My soul is losing tied up in chain.
Cant take anymore want it all to wash away...

Answer 68

I got this idea from a poem i read so i wrote my version.

Answer 69

Nice! I like this! =)

Answer 70

Nice! I like this! =)

Answer 71

thanks

Answer 72

Nice work again @Wolfboy

Answer 73

Thx again ash lol

Answer 74

I like the metaphor. The beginning was very powerful. You took a fairly common metaphor and made it unique!

Answer 75

Thank you but uh... In which of the three?

Answer 76

ok i see lol

Answer 77

My newer posted poem is up There ^^^^^^^

Answer 78

amazinnggg wolfy!!

Answer 79

thanx

Answer 80

Wolf, I used to try and write poetry as well. I enjoy rhyming words to make them sound euphonious. Keep it up man. :D

Answer 81

thanx Austin....

Answer 82

Wolfboy, you have some talent!
I like it! :)

Answer 83

Thx

Answer 84

Nice writing i see some of the meanings and is it just me or did you literally "put your feelings on paper" in disguise and anger poems.

Answer 85

Ha, ha - that's what I was wondering, as well, Alphamalewolf.

Answer 86

yea its just those two poems have the most well i guess feelings in them

Answer 87

alpha male wolf you are right i guess i toke years of anger and rage and put it on paper although i have much more i decided to put it on paper then hurt someone with it.

Answer 88

hello again

Answer 89

Hello

Answer 90

hey shadowfiend

Answer 91

did u get my message :)