On a sunny Sunday afternoon; a sound booming shouting hooray, cheers in my ears as I dribble down the hardwood plain court. Coach Johnson yelling “bazooka, but I couldn’t hear him as I dropped a three pointer in to give us a one point lead. 2 minutes later, the score was tied and there was a jump ball with five seconds to go and the ball came to me and I took off and scored the lay-up. We have won the championship,” said Coach Johnson. can someone please edit this
hooray should be "hooray!" Should be a " at the end of bazooka = " bazooka!", (put an '!' since he is yelling.) There should be an " at the begginning of "We have won the championship,"
Are you just suppose to correct quotation marks?
no i just want someone to proofread it for me.
Its missing a few quotation marks
tell me please
I just showed you
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