Question

Proof Read my paper please and feel free to edit as much as possible!

Answer 1

please help!

Answer 2

Its pretty good.!
If I had to change anything it would be this sentence, "The problem with his theory is that a person could do whatever they, whenever they want and it’s not certain that it’s good or bad"

I'd add a lil change it to something like "The problem with his theory is that a person could do whatever they wanted, whenever they wanted and it’s not certain that it’s good or bad"

Answer 3

thanks

Answer 4

It's good make sure and watch out for fragments and run ons. And your punctuation like the ; , and :