Proof Read my paper please and feel free to edit as much as possible!

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anonymous · Answer

please help!

anonymous · Answer

Its pretty good.!
If I had to change anything it would be this sentence, "The problem with his theory is that a person could do whatever they, whenever they want and it’s not certain that it’s good or bad" 

I'd add a lil change it to something like "The problem with his theory is that a person could do whatever they wanted, whenever they wanted and it’s not certain that it’s good or bad"

anonymous · Answer

thanks

anonymous · Answer

It's good make sure and watch out for fragments and run ons.  And your punctuation like the ; , and :