Can Somebody Please proofread my paragraph?

The main reason why I would like to peer teach is because, I always enjoyed helping other people in areas that need improvement. I feel that it is necessary for me to help because, when I first started college, I needed a lot of help in my science courses and the tutors at the MSC were always there to help. It is currently my third semester. I am in the commerce program, and I hope to one day become a charted accountant. To get there, I still have a lot of work to do. I hope that with this peer teaching course, it will improve the way I ...

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Can Somebody Please proofread my paragraph?

The main reason why I would like to peer teach is because, I always enjoyed helping other people in areas that need improvement. I feel that it is necessary for me to help because, when I first started college, I needed a lot of help in my science courses and the tutors at the MSC were always there to help. It is currently my third semester. I am in the commerce program, and I hope to one day become a charted accountant. To get there, I still have a lot of work to do. I hope that with this peer teaching course, it will improve the way I ...

anonymous · Answer

...interact with others, because this is an important skill to have in any working domain.

anonymous · Answer

The main reason why I would like to peer teach is that I have always enjoyed helping others- especially in areas that need improvement. I feel that it is necessary for me to help because, when I first started college, I needed a lot of help in my science courses and the tutors at the MSC were always there to help.[ It is currently my third semester. Short, random sentence, try and place it within a sentense] I am in the commerce program, and I hope to one day become a charted accountant. To get there, I still have a lot of work to do. I hope that with this peer teaching course, it will improve the way I ...


last sentense looks okie dokie to me!

anonymous · Answer

thank you