Question

I NEED HELP ON MY ESSAY! :))

Answer 1

This is what i have so far finished.

Answer 2

can you help me?

Answer 3

what is the essay about??

Answer 4

with prince's sentence being unfair and explaining.

Answer 5

i never read the story it goes to. sorry

Answer 6

romeo and juliet

Answer 7

didnt read it. cant help you. really sorry

Answer 8

i am not good at editing something like this, but I have some question from your essay:
1/ Don't we have to introduce the novel, summary and stress on the parts we want to analyze?
2/ The introduction and conclusion are not the same idea with different words?
3/ Can we break the essay into parts without transformation sentence or at least make it turn smoothly?
4/ when quoting a long quote, what should we do to make it clear?
5/ Don't you think that the essay seems unbalance between introduction and body?
My suggest is that: If you don't have to limit the words we use in an essay, write down all details which make our idea clear
in the limit word essay, pick out few of the most important details to analyze.
If you can, avoid using "I" in essay, If you cannot, you can keep it but it makes the essay sounds biased or prejudiced.
That's what I studied from my course. Hope that helps