Question

i dnt no how to make a introduction paragraph help please!!!

Answer 1

Basically tell what the story will be about. Make sure you have an attention grabber. Be sure to make your last sentence your thesis statement. For example, In this essay, you will learn about birds, clothes, shoes, etc

Answer 2

this is for ap world history nd its on wetsern eurpoes political history

Answer 3

what's your title?

Answer 4

political history of europe

Answer 5

Your first sentence should be your HOOK -- a quote or interesting fact that grabs the attention of your reader. Your last sentence should be your THESIS -- an arguable statement that you will spend the rest of the essay supporting. Think of it as the "core" of your essay.

In between the hook and the thesis, give any background information that is necessary for your reader to understand the thesis. That way, by the time they get to the thesis at the end of the paragraph, it will make sense to them!
Does that make sense?

Answer 6

yea..........but how do is start or make my first sent

Answer 7

well, what's the main idea of your paper? I know it's about the political history of europe, but what are you saying about that history?

Answer 8

HOW IT CHANGED THROUGHT OUT THAT TIME PERIOD nd its up nd downs(effects) of revultions

Answer 9

Did you come across any quotes about the effects of revolutions/how it changed over time while researching or reading?

Answer 10

Sometimes a quote can make a good first sentence. (Hook.)

Answer 11

nope....i cant even find primary sources

Answer 12

OK that's fine. Because I don't know much about this specific time period, tell me: were there multiple revolutions? If so, how many?

Answer 13

bout 3-5

Answer 14

OK so how about this: "The political change caused by _(however many) revolutions is immense." Then you go on to explain a little (in 3 or 4 sentences) and then wrap it up with your thesis.

Answer 15

Do you have a thesis yet?

Answer 16

nope:)

Answer 17

Cool, let's make one :)

Answer 18

ok:)

Answer 19

What do you think about all the political changes? (I mean, the effects of all those revolutions.) Did they help the country? Hurt it?

Answer 20

actually both...

Answer 21

Cool! That's a really interesting position.

Answer 22

Do you think you can make a thesis statement out of that?

Answer 23

the revolutions that happened in wetsern europe both hurt nd help it.?? like that?

Answer 24

Yeah! You might want to say "...were both helpful and hurtful" so that you don't leave an "it" hanging out there on the end. But that's just a technicality.

Answer 25

Now just add some basic explanatory sentences in between your hook and thesis and you have an introductory paragraph! :)

Answer 26

ok:)

Answer 27

Here's how you can organize the rest of your essay based on the thesis you came up with:
Paragraph 1 -- introduction
Paragraph 2 -- talk about all the revolutions that happened
Paragraph 3 -- talk about some of the ways the revolutions were helpful
Paragraph 4 -- talk about some of the ways the revolutions were harmful
Paragraph 5 -- conclusion
:)

Does that make sense?

Answer 28

it needs to be 3 pgs

Answer 29

That should still work! Each paragraph should be between 5-8 sentences long. That means that a paragraph will take up about half a page, maybe a little more. Which should get you to 3.

Answer 30

ok:) thanks:)

Answer 31

No problem! If any other issues pop up while you're writing it, let me know :)

Answer 32

ok:) thanks:)