another one, please help

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loser66 · Answer

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loser66 · Answer

check my grammar, please

anonymous · Answer

I may not be right. just suggestions. hopefully someone can verify!

loser66 · Answer

Thanks a lot.

pixiedust1 · Answer

Hello!  I'm just opening the doc, hold on :D

pixiedust1 · Answer

Okay!  Overall, it was very well-written :D
The only two things were that "feel" in the first paragraph needed an "s" at the end to make it "feels", and in the second paragraph, "indicated" would not be the right word for that sentence.  I would have replaced the word for you,  but I wasn't sure what you had meant by it

pixiedust1 · Answer

I'm not sure which one your computer will be able to read, so I saved one as a pdf, and the other as an OpenOffice doc

loser66 · Answer

Thanks a lot for your help.

pixiedust1 · Answer

Thank you for your help with my math! :D
Good luck! :)

loser66 · Answer

but you didn't tell me which word you want to replace "indicated"?

anonymous · Answer

would "related" be the right word to take the place of indicated? in my mind, it makes some sense lol.

pixiedust1 · Answer

I'm not sure what you meant by the word indicated, so I wasn't sure what word would be suitable to replace it with.