Question

Heres a poem and pic i drew after a break up

Answer 1

cute

Answer 2

what about the poem

Answer 3

amazing

Answer 4

A few grammatical errors there. Perhaps improvement would come from a creative wording, or comparison, or you could stick with the personification theme you have going. Beware of restating phrases that are common as well, as it tends to have the same effect as saying something is "cold as ice," you know?

Answer 5

@breanneh

Answer 6

@forevershorty