Question

I’ve always been the girl in the back of the class,
Never said anything, never asked.
I kept my head down, & my mouth shut,
But I was always picked on, just my luck.
I wasn't alone, I had my friends;
But at desperate times, they were just pretend.
They slowly faded away, I wasn't very liked,
They all hated me, for who I was inside.
I messed up things, & I would try to mend,
Is that why I was dropping friends?
I now know who true friends are,
They are one in millions, pure as stars.
If you know who I'm talking about,
You are very much loved, no doubt.

What you think?

Answer 1

I love this so much, I think you did a great job!

Answer 2

it's beautiful great job.

Answer 3

wow touching

Answer 4

thanks!

Answer 5

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I liked this very much.
"They all hated me, for who I was inside."
that ^^ was my favorite line. I also liked how you conveyed your emotions perfectly. Nice job!

Answer 6

yay!

Answer 7

It was very interesting. Great symbolism, and I love the wordplay and emotional appeal you use. You are a very talented writer.

Answer 8

thanks ^^^^^