Question

Hey guys... So This is a poem I wrote a few days agao.. Tell me what you think?

Also like my poetry page? www.facebook.com/charitybuggpoetry

Love

My heart yearns for you.Am I feeling this thing they call love? If so, I hope it remains.I love the butterflies. I love the way my heart beats faster when i talk to you.You.Your all I need. This,This is blissful.I feel like It's what I've been waiting for.

Answer 1

sounds pretty good :3

Answer 2

Thanks ^_^

Answer 3

very nice very nice

Answer 4

u could turn this into a song @charitybugg

Answer 5

This is a great poem explaining the first time being "in love". c:

Answer 6

@scarymary101 I thought about that too!

Answer 7

@kewlgeek555 I wouldn't call it first love.. maybe a love that I hadn't experienced yet. :) thanks for reading.

Answer 8

@charitybugg do u want to?

Answer 9

@scarymary101
it sounds like an idea... what do you think?

Answer 10

id say go for it. i got some ppl who mite help to. :)

Answer 11

Yeah? Hmm.. if I did. it would def. need to be added to to.

Answer 12

ya so u in? i could do the melody and i think u should do the lyrics. i mean ill help if u want but id say u need to stick with the lyrics u have it down.

Answer 13

very creative. I totally love it! <3

Answer 14

I'm not sure. lol.
Thanks everyone for all of the comments.
@scarymary101 thank you for the ideas