Help, Very emotional story, but I need help revising it!

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anonymous · Answer

Its about my best friend and I  @Ahlpa_Omega32 @Kristen17

anonymous · Answer

@countryboy97 , this is what I wrote

anonymous · Answer

i can't view it because i don't have Microsoft word sorry but can you give meh a glimpse of what it is about?

anonymous · Answer

I can just message it to you, like copy and paste?

anonymous · Answer

yeah can you thanks!

anonymous · Answer

@undeadknight26

anonymous · Answer

ok done with the editing and remarks..attaching the edited doc

anonymous · Answer

here's the edited and revised doc

anonymous · Answer

Thankyou

anonymous · Answer

they are in love, but cannot be together...

anonymous · Answer

No problem. If you see an red underline mark on a comma or period that is the punctuation mark you need to use. The punctuation marks with the red line on top are i removed

anonymous · Answer

Oh ok. I think it would be better to make that clear in the writing then. In case someone else reads it, they should understand the meaning behind it.

anonymous · Answer

Okay
:)

anonymous · Answer

If you need any more advice, help just message me :)

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