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The devil is taking over. I don't know how much longer I can last. It's to late to save me. It's far to late. I can't control myself anymore. He is killing me slowly. Can't anybody help me?
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It's a nice beginner poem.
It's nice, but sometimes repition isn't good, so like how 'me' is used in the last two lines. It would end more roundly if you ditched the last me and made is 'can't anybody help?'
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