Question

Select a hook for your introductory paragraph and write it here.
WILL GIVE MEDAL AND FAN!!!
just wanting to know if what i have is a good start?

Answer 1

okay
wassup

Answer 2

“They are among 39,000 girls forced into marriage every day around the world, sold like cattle to enrich their families.”

Answer 3

this is what i have

Answer 4

that's good
what seems to be the problem

Answer 5

that there are girls being forced to marry that are under 18.

Answer 6

yes ma'am your hook is good

Answer 7

can you helo me on something else?

Answer 8

suuree
wassup

Answer 9

2. Write a two- to four-sentence BRIDGE to connect your hook and thesis statement here.

Answer 10

well whats your thesis

Answer 11

“They are among 39,000 girls forced into marriage every day around the world, sold like cattle to enrich their families.” In my book the main character had experienced this same issue. Also evidence of laws that prevent forced marriage and they grant equality is “Men and women of full age, without any limitation due to race, nationality or religion, have the right to marry and to found a family. They are entitled to equal rights as to marriage, during marriage and at its dissolution.”

Answer 12

I dont think this is good though

Answer 13

i think it sounds fine dont doubt your self :D

Answer 14

is this good enough for my first paragraph?

Answer 15

yes ma'am i think soo its strong hook puts your point out there good thesis i like it

Answer 16

thanks so much

Answer 17

no problem