Question

Write a 15 line poem using metaphor, simile, and hyperbole.

Answer 1

well do you know what all of those are first ?

Answer 2

yes :)

Answer 3

alright then whats the problem your having? please explain

Answer 4

:P

Answer 5

i just need help

Answer 6

like to give me at least a sentence and i'll figure out the rest.

Answer 7

well what do you want or have to have the poem about?

Answer 8

myself :9

Answer 9

Alright well tell me about yourself what you want in the poem

Answer 10

hmmm

Answer 11

Well i am good problem solving ;)

Answer 12

explain like what kind of problems

Answer 13

Math lol

Answer 14

ok what do you want to say about how your good at math

Answer 15

idk :(

Answer 16

ok umm.. do you play sports or have any hobbies uh age ummm othings people know your for

Answer 17

I strike at Math? lol

Answer 18

i like playing baseball, basketball, soccer, and volleyball.

Answer 19

ohh and FOOTBALL

Answer 20

People know me for preaching about the bible.

Answer 21

:)

Answer 22

Try writing it about sports :)

Answer 23

ok good good um try to put those in there like what you do and how you like to play those sports and also talk about how you feel about the bible ..... are you getting what im saying

Answer 24

yes :)

Answer 25

okay do you have a idea of what your going to write

Answer 26

I walk in the mornings like a Camel because i don't get tired to teach people about God's Word.

Answer 27

like that?

Answer 28

try this

Answer 29

I walk in the mornings like a Camel because i do not grow tired of teaching the word of God to the one who will listen.

Answer 30

xD perfect :)

Answer 31

glad you think so

Answer 32

ok so that is 2 lines. 13 more xD

Answer 33

lol good luck hey when you get them done pm me your poem and ill do some editing if it needs it so it will flow

Answer 34

thanks and just know, how long more would you be on?

Answer 35

ill be on till about 8

Answer 36

eastern standard time

Answer 37

does that help?

Answer 38

sorry so how much longer? @this-emo-kid9

Answer 39

o and when you have a chance, please visit this site: http://www.jw.org/en/

Answer 40

ill be on for another 3 hours

Answer 41

o ok

Answer 42

so far i got this: I walk in the mornings like a Camel because I do not grow tired of
Teaching the word of God to the one who will listen.
After I kick like a kangaroo in the park.
I throw hard as a professional player.
I hang out with my friends like a monkey does.

Answer 43

@this-emo-kid9

Answer 44

That is.. well.
You're jumping from one topic to another. And is there a specific type of poem you're writing? Or is it freestyle?

Answer 45

um that was good kid but manlm is right its alittle scattered

Answer 46

um :P

Answer 47

so what should i change?

Answer 48

Only focus on one topic. So if you're doing religion, tell what religion (or not, if you don't want to) and why you like it, and why you want to spread it. Probably make a twist or an irony near the middle or end.

Answer 49

do what he/she said

Answer 50

my English teacher said to write about yourself.

Answer 51

so i just listed things i do :)

Answer 52

i still need 10 more lines.

Answer 53

That is one part of yourself. If you want to go with all those things, then start the poem in a generalized fashion. Have a theme. So would you like it to be optimistic or something?

Answer 54

just about what i do and like

Answer 55

http://www.jw.org/en/ this is what i preach about :)

Answer 56

Oh, well, that conflicts with what I believe, so I can't help much on that front. First though, tell me what type of poem you want to right.

Answer 57

:P

Answer 58

write*

Answer 59

@this-emo-kid9

Answer 60

he can't help me :p

Answer 61

umm but hes right

Answer 62

about?

Answer 63

I defend for what I know and no one can take that away from me, not even a family member. Is it good? @this-emo-kid9

Answer 64

first what grade are you in so i know how well the quality writing your poem has to be

Answer 65

10th

Answer 66

i doing 11th grade English :)

Answer 67

I should be 9th but I am advanced by a year.

Answer 68

alright now what you said sounded alittle aggressive so tone it down a bit and put in why you bileve things but remember its a poem so it has to flow

Answer 69

k

Answer 70

so i could say: I would never stop teaching on what i am best on.

Answer 71

ok say

Answer 72

I know that i am a a TRUE CHRISTIAN because i am in the TRUTH.

Answer 73

or The WORD

Answer 74

bro im atheist so im trying to help you as much as i can but i just dont know about all this stuff

Answer 75

:p

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and i dont want to

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you kidding?

Answer 78

no i dont want to learn about god

Answer 79

but i am still trying really hard to help you because i got 4 medals on my poetry
work at my old highschool

Answer 80

Why not something like:
There are few things in life,
That bring about a passion,
With a frequent, yet gamely, strife,
As my love for religion.

That's a rhyme sequence of abab, though 'religion' and 'passion' aren't great rhymes.

Answer 81

And yeah, I already get enough JW people coming to my door -_-

Answer 82

i put a satanic cross on mine so they dont even come in my drive way but hey it worked

Answer 83

Haha, I told them they were disrespecting me and my belief in the spaghetti god.

Answer 84

hahaha XD i like that

Answer 85

Oh no, do you think we scared away @dannyrod2000 ?

Answer 86

maybe but hey its life

Answer 87

Yup. Gotta accept that not everyone is the same.

Answer 88

Anyways, I have to go now. Fun talking to you. Bye

Answer 89

kk bye