Question

Pearl is described as an "elf-child," a "sprite," and "the "embodiment of the warfare of Hester's spirit." All of these descriptions mark Pearl as enchanting but also strange and obviously creepy.

What change would make this sentence more objective? @SolomonZelman @sososmart @sky577

Answer 1

Hey Beautiful you think you can help?

Answer 2

yes i would changge the sentence to this:Pearl is described as an "elf-child", a "sprite", and the "embodiment of the warfare of Hester's spirit".
All of these descriptions mark Pearl as enchanting but also strange and obviously creepy.

Answer 3

My bad Beautiful I forgot to put the answer choices hold on a sec

Answer 4

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Answer 5

Answer is here http://goo.gl/HqAe6c

Answer 6

Change "obviously creepy" to "unsettling."
Change "obviously creepy" to "poorly behaved."
Change "enchanting" to "cruel."
Change "enchanting" to "potentially evil."

Answer 7

Change "obviously creepy" to "unsettling."

Answer 8

Thanks Beautiful

Answer 9

Want help me some more?

Answer 10

sure

Answer 11

ur wecome

Answer 12

An elongated hyphen would make this sentence grammatically correct: After the semifinals, the team had only one thing on its mind winning the championship.

Which sentence demonstrates the correct use of an elongated hyphen?

After the semifinals – the team had only one thing on its mind winning the championship.

After the semifinals, the team had only one – thing on its mind winning the championship.

After the semifinals, the team – had only one thing on its mind winning the championship

After the semifinals, the team had only one thing on its mind – winning the championship.

Answer 13

After the semifinals, the team had only one thing on its mind – winning the championship.

Answer 14

Thanks Beautiful, can I ask to help me with another

Answer 15

yes u may

Answer 16

Which sentence uses an elongated hyphen correctly?

Amber likes dancing – and singing, so she has practiced both since she was a little girl.

Hilary – Daniel – and Andre love Broadway musicals, so they joined the show choir at their school.

The band -- is looking for a new drummer because their former drummer moved to a different town.

Andrew wanted to learn to play the guitar – even though he couldn’t read music – so he could join a band.

Answer 17

Andrew wanted to learn to play the guitar – even though he couldn’t read music – so he could join a band.

Answer 18

Thanks, later good looking

Answer 19

ur welcome

Answer 20

Hey @sky577 did you get my email?_?

Answer 21

yea i did srry was doing something

Answer 22

Your Fine Beautiful take your time