Question

Create a paraphrase of the following sentence from “The Cold Equations”: She stopped occasionally, as though trying to find the right words to tell them what she wanted them to know, then the pencil would resume its whispering to the paper.

Answer 1

@iambatman @dan815 I suck at paraphrasing sorry

Answer 2

hahah very funny but thanks

Answer 3

@arabpride @blah124 @Cpt.Sparz @deshawn1 @e.mccormick @flipfloptj @GabbyCakes @Hotchellerae21 @iambatman @jhonyy9 @iambatman @kirbykirby

Answer 4

here and yes

Answer 5

hey help

Answer 6

thanks for coming

Answer 7

me

Answer 8

@jose12345 i think she means me lol

Answer 9

alll so sorry

Answer 10

lol can u help him?

Answer 11

@Here_to_Help15 can help too

Answer 12

please

Answer 13

i did that question i need help is this one

Answer 14

Create a paraphrase of the following sentence from “The Cold Equations”: Faint and ineffably poignant and tender, the last words came from the cold metal of the communicator: "Good-bye, little sister—"

Answer 15

i suck at these sorry bro

Answer 16

The communicator tenderly communicated the last words:"Good-bye, little sister." @Hotchellerae21 @Here_to_Help15 is this right? lol i need help on this too

Answer 17

i am better at writing not revising and crap

Answer 18

A paraphrase is...

*your own rendition of essential information and ideas expressed by someone else, presented in a new form.
*one legitimate way (when accompanied by accurate documentation) to borrow from a source.
*a more detailed restatement than a summary, which focuses concisely on a single main idea.

Answer 19

Looking up some of the words in the thesaurus should help. :) I can write the paraphrase if nothing else, but I wanted you to see what you are capable of doing. :)

Answer 20

Faint- not seen or understood clearly
ineffably- beyond the power to describe
poignant- having the power to affect the feelings or sympathies

Answer 21

So from that you can take the definitions and sum them up..... Basically, The last words that came from the communicator were not understood clearly and having beyond the power to describe of effecting feelings.

Answer 22

@jose12345

Answer 23

is there another @jose12345

Answer 24

yes

Answer 25

i think he knows what it is, it's just hard to make one