This is my second paragraph in a cover letter. Can someone read through it for me? Thank you!

As a teacher candidate who wants to work in an urban setting this program is wonderful in the way they present the class. We are placed in our school quickly and interacting with students already. Through this program we are able to help experience diversity and the struggles the students may have. I love having the experience of watching teachers who are firm and nurturing and working towards helping students gain the tools to work toward breaking the cycle of poverty.

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This is my second paragraph in a cover letter. Can someone read through it for me? Thank you!

As a teacher candidate who wants to work in an urban setting this program is wonderful in the way they present the class. We are placed in our school quickly and interacting with students already. Through this program we are able to help experience diversity and the struggles the students may have. I love having the experience of watching teachers who are firm and nurturing and working towards helping students gain the tools to work toward breaking the cycle of poverty.

arabpride · Answer

As a teacher candidate who wants to work in an urban setting(,) this program* is wonderful in the way they present the class. We are placed in our school quickly and interacting with students already (using a different word such as "immediately" would help the flow of this sentence here). Through this program we are able to help (the word help here could be removed; unnecessary) experience diversity and the struggles the students may have. I love having the experience of watching teachers who are firm and nurturing and working towards helping students gain the tools to work toward breaking the cycle of poverty.

*(since this is the beginning of a new paragraph, it might be smart to include the name of the program)