Question

emotional poem time yay
its longer than my attention span so i'll post it in the comments ~

Answer 1

i hope there wont be cracks in my skin
or bones snapping because of wind
no turning back
or caving in eyes still intact,
once you step forward you can't step back,
or so they said.
and what am i doing?
inside this familiar shed?
there's memories in here, or are they still in my head?
but i thought they were gone,
packed, shelved, away
burnt into the past days ?
i'd like to keep forward
but i keep getting dragged back,
sit here and don't move as it stabbed my back.
i yawn
nothings new
i am so weak
so tolerant of fear
i ask for help,
they say they can't hear.
but they're laughing right there
and it's almost the worst thing..

but then days get blurry
never in much hurry
my veins are feeling tangled
the doctors keep playing them.
the bus will never stop
my mind will never stop
i'm sitting in the back
just waiting for my stop
stop
listen.

pin point your life,
it's not going to take one try to get it all right.
you're going to fall
get beaten up blistered and all
but it's how you get up that means it all.
strive for yourself
learn how to make it right,
unhealthy relationship?
turn it off like a light.
you are worth too much
for someone else to control your life
and why
why do you only feel appreciated
when it comes from other than yourself?
your body is your home
the only home you will ever have,
learn to love yourself before you move ahead.

~

Answer 2

Wow, love how you used free verse and enjambments here and there.. you did very well!! Good Job!!!!!! ^-^*

Answer 3

thank you so much, it means a lot !!!!

Answer 4

You're Very Welcome ^-^*