Question

World-class climber Nils Carlson came down from Everest with a frost-bitten nose but a triumphant spirit. This was unexpected.

I have to fix the vague pronoun been going back to this for for a long time need help

Answer 1

Everest

Answer 2

where does it go?

Answer 3

It's vague because it should be Everest mountain.

Answer 4

Mount Everest*

Answer 5

replace everest with mountain?

Answer 6

kk

Answer 7

No, it should be Mount Everest, because Everest is a mountain.

Answer 8

Yea. :)

Answer 9

it was wrong on the plato assignment

Answer 10

Is it correct now?

Answer 11

loading

Answer 12

still wrong

Answer 13

Um, no. The pronoun is "This". Does this concern the frost bitten nose or the triumphant spirit?

Answer 14

i dont know

Answer 15

I'm guessing it is the spirit. So fix it by saying "his triumphant spirit was unexpected" for the second line.