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OpenStudy (anonymous):

What is the best way to rewrite this sentence? Arriving at his favorite place in the park, the man sat underneath an evergreen tree with a book. The man sat underneath an evergreen tree arriving at his favorite place in the park with a book. The man sat underneath an evergreen tree with a book arriving at his favorite place in the park. With a book, the man sat underneath an evergreen tree arriving at his favorite place in the park Arriving at his favorite place in the park, the man with a book sat underneath an evergreen tree.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Which do you think is correct ?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@HappySprout

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Sorry someone was taging me in the math section. Weird.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

*is

OpenStudy (anonymous):

He must've tagged you again, cause you're gone. :P

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Either that, or my computer is lagging like always.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Computer

OpenStudy (solomonzelman):

honestly all of these ways are horrible.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Again, which do you think it is ? @HappySprout

OpenStudy (solomonzelman):

World's most horrible sentences: \(\normalsize\color{blue}{ \rm The~~man~~arrived~~at~~the~~park~~and~~set~~in~~his~~favorite~~place, \\ underneath~~an~~evergreen~~tree,~~with~~~a~~~book. }\) (this is how I would say it)

OpenStudy (solomonzelman):

or, you an write "with a book" right after word "place" instead.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

You can write With a book in the beginning of the sentence if it follows a comma.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@SolomonZelman Can you not ?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

You're welcome.

OpenStudy (solomonzelman):

What do you mean, "can I not" , I am just saying that whatever this school the questioner is attending, has horrible English classes.

OpenStudy (solomonzelman):

Why? because it is preferable (if not a must) for a sentence to follow parallelism.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Ha ha, I don't follow those complex steps. I just see which sentence makes the most sense.

OpenStudy (solomonzelman):

all of the choices, are not "wrong", but for the least part, they are not very "appropriate." this is where a distinction between inappropriate and appropriate is drawn.

OpenStudy (solomonzelman):

anyway, by no means do I want to interrupt, so stick to the options, is what I would council.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Ok

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yeah, I know. I hate it when I have those type of questions too.

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