can someone revise my free verse poem?

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deadpoolroxz · Answer

The Rain 
               By: Ellijah .S. De'Shazer
                                          2/26/15

It seems to comes from an unknown world
washing the earth with its tears
is this meeting a temporary necessity?
is it a coincidence?
or is it an addiction? 
rain is just like a girl
sometimes kind 
some times fickle
poring down heavenly 
or not falling at all
poring down hot
or freezing halfway to the ground
even though it is unstable 
and sometimes frail 
it still makes a rainbow in it's womb 
caressing a child in it's bosom
it is the source of all life
so do not mock it 
do not wast it 
do not defile it 
cherish it 
or it  will leave you  
never to return ...

anonymous · Answer

@deadpoolroxz wow, that's good. i like it :)

anonymous · Answer

1st line: It seems $sf \color{red}{\text{to come}}$ from an unknown world
9th and 11th line: $\sf  \color{red}{pouring}$  ~i'm not sure about this one.. because sometimes people used the words 'pore' and 'pour' interchangeably.
19th line:  $\sf  \color{red}{waste}$

then add some punctuation and you're good to go :D

I like the theme of your poem, it is really lovely!!

anonymous · Answer

Amazing poem. quite lovely.

deadpoolroxz · Answer

thanxz