Question

poem please critic

Answer 1

Watching myself through the looking glass.
Mirror mirror ever had so many glimmers.
Hard to see
Hard to breathe
What is true.
Tell yourself you’re better off died.
Tell yourself these many lies.
Trying to hide from the rest of the world.
Because who could comprehend you illusion
In the background.
You’re blinding in, to chemistry.
Your say yes to “Reality”
You’re biting your lip and tarring your soul.
You feel so alone and made of clay.
Molded to fit anyone’s needs but yourself.
You’re lost in the rain clouds,
Soon to just fall.
Now you’re waiting for the rainbow
To finally come out.
The colors they fill you.
You finally have no fear.
The truth is your instrument
And the pot of gold is someone near.
Just not yet here.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

I love it!

Answer 4

@Baby_Bear69 so glad

Answer 5

Wow this is really well written

Answer 6

I love it! It is amazing, like everything else you write! :)

Answer 7

haha ^ikr

Answer 8

:)

Answer 9

@horsegirl27 thank you lol

Answer 10

yw np :)

Answer 11

@k12andstudyislandhelp thank you and i seriously doubt there all good i went on my wattpad account and saw poems from a yr ago and they were pretty bad lol but thank you

Answer 12

they are all good. And 1 year ago, you didnt write as well as you do now. If i published anything i wrote that long ago. I would be so embarrassed at my writing skills, and my handwriting. You learn as you grow. You past isnt your future. When you grow, you learn. And now i am sounding like a mother. So bye. :)

Answer 13

A year is long ago. anyone will grow as a writer in a year

Answer 14

@horsegirl27 @k12andstudyislandhelp lol yea but i thought they were good then so whose to say next yr i wont think the same

Answer 15

well, u have changed and learned more and improved and now ur best is much better. But u best then wasn't so high

Answer 16

I agree with @horsegirl27 Your best is now something better. You thought those were good a year ago because that was your best.

Answer 17

thanks loves

Answer 18

"Tell yourself you’re better off died." Is it supposed to be dead instead of died? That was my only complaint. Other than that, it looks great.