Question

wrote this a while ago when someone said something bout family tell me what you think

Answer 1

isnt everybody family united by struggle and pain happiness and sorrow by blood united we stand tall divided we all help built this crap from the ground up these nations these clothes these shoes we all help each other no matter what the human race we might hate eachother but will always have the others back or hope for the best no one wants to die and no one is ever truly alone (but maybe thats just me )

Answer 2

@ispike

Answer 3

@legends and at
@Micah1mcdugle

Answer 4

WOW ITS TRUE

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@demonchild99

Answer 6

gud job I like it

Answer 7

thx

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@~SierraBozarth~ and @horsegirl27

Answer 9

this is really good

Answer 10

thx can u tag folks for me please

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but really thx so much

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@TwilightRain1

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hold on, i'll read it in a minute. multitasking

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k

Answer 15

nice job :)

Answer 16

thank u :)

Answer 17

this is really good. i love it

Answer 18

aww thank you :)

Answer 19

I really like it, but it seems like there isn't any punctuation. It looks like a paragraph which uses punctuation. If it's a poem, it needs to be formatted that way. Other then that, great job! :)

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@maddie91101 thx yea i dont know what it is i just thought of it and was rushing before i forget it

Answer 21

i think its really good. However I'm gonna be completely honest the grammar is awful. the punctuation is bad and even some of the words aren't properly used. the concept is good. I feel like this is a great bones structure because I think u could elaborate so much more. I often write my first draft similar to this and use it as the bones. The concept is great and your voice is amazing

Answer 22

Does this need a lot of work sure but honestly this has so much potential and if i didnt believe that i would have replied with its good

Answer 23

yea as i said i just thought of it like i do and i forget it easily thats why

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I'm only this honest with writers i believe could be amzing

Answer 25

yes thank you lol im not offended

Answer 26

I mean its only like that because of that particular reason.

Answer 27

I like it cause it shows it came from the heart it doesn't matter that it isn't perfect in fact ik a few from awhile ago that weren't perfect its amazing and it should be that way at least this one cause its a personal coming from you lol keep it up :)

Answer 28

@ispike if something hits again can u proof read for me maybe ?

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and thx :) micah

Answer 30

@nothingwasthesame of course

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aww thank you so much :) @ispike

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@nothingwasthesame no prob anytime

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OK for future reference please excuse the grammar !! sorry guys

Answer 34

waooo nice work

Answer 35

boyfriEND, girlfriEND, bestfriEND but famILY they always stick together :) keep writing! good work.

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thx @nono266 :)

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I like it.

Answer 38

I love this @nothingwasthesame

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don't mind me im just watching you lol

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@nothingwasthesame

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lol being taller and a abomanation lol :P i guess i cant stop you @Micah1mcdugle

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lol see I was joking but ok @nothingwasthesame

Answer 43

dont spam my post :p and i was joking to :p @Micah1mcdugle

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lol spam ok I see @nothingwasthesame