Question

A Poem.

Answer 1

I see you day by day
gazing day by day
never once you came up to me.

Our hearts beats like one
And our pride has taken on
But day by day we've never speak
Day by day we've never seeked.

Writing it all
but it never falls
my heart beats like one
and your beats another.

Day by day goes on
then comes fall, winter, and spring
Day by day we've never talked until we see.

From that day on it was two hearts along with a small beat

Answer 2

It's a first time I've written a poem and please be honest.

Answer 3

@OM14forever
@Sam_Aka_Sara
@SamsungFanBoy

Answer 4

@jackmullen55
@nickmeneses1997
@Thesmarterone

Answer 5

@HazelLuv99
@<3teddybearhugs<3

Answer 6

@braves12

Answer 7

omg thts rlly good i love it

Answer 8

Thanks @HazelLuv99

Answer 9

very good! :D

Answer 10

ur welcome :) @sugarplum15

Answer 11

This is a really good poem i love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 12

Thanks @Sam_Aka_Sara & @Thesmarterone

Answer 13

This is amazing :) Nice Job! I encourage you to write more :)

Answer 14

Thanks @SamsungFanBoy

Answer 15

As soon as I get some more in my head. :)

Answer 16

Okay, great! :)

Answer 17

Its really good!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 18

Thanks @xo.minnie.xox

Answer 19

@jprose

Answer 20

its really good

Answer 21

Thxs @jprose

Answer 22

This was really good love. Good job

Answer 23

@jackmullen55 Thanks!

Answer 24

personally its not the type of poetry that i love to read. I really like reading things that show a different perspective. Things that most people would stand up and say that wrong when the truth is that its right its just a different way of processing and thinking.

Now that has nothing to do with your poem that has to do with me as the reader. Looking at the actual writing it's very good. It's very soft and sweet, light and airy in a sense. These are all good things. Somethings that might improve it is by giving more imagery and spending alittle more time on each metaphor. I hope this helps. You are a great writer and if you werent i wouldnt have bothered in saying something.

Always remember poetry is a priority to ones self so no matter what anyone says if you think its perfect than its perfect.

Answer 25

Thanks for the huge tip

Answer 26

I'll be bring this one down and try too add another poem but with an attachment with it.

Answer 27

@sugarplum15 Good job