Question

here is a poem...

Answer 1

Depreasion!!!


Painting with a razor,
on the canvas of the skin
the scars left on the outside,
are nothing to those within
so color it in scarlet,
and go and paint it white
something to remind you,
of what you know wasn’t right

Behind my smile,
is a hurting heart
behind my laugh,
im falling apart
look closley at me
and you will see
the girl i am
isn’t me...

Answer 2

It's so sad...A good sad! But sad...Good job!!

Answer 3

.... its how i feel...

Answer 4

Painting with a razor,
on the canvas of the skin
the scars left on the outside,
are nothing to those within
so color it in scarlet,
and go and paint it white
something to remind you,
of what you know (just) wasn’t right <-- i think that would be a good adjustment

Answer 5

okay! thanks!

Answer 6

and believe you me, i know exactly how that feels. it is very lonely when you go through that. i suggest you get close to other people, and stay away from that sharp silver colored friend of yours. it did some real damage to me, and has made my life very hard to live. in fact it is rather burdensome, and will drag you down.

it leaves several scars,
over the years.
but it lets out our screams,
as well as our fears.

it gives us relief,
and we need that sensation.
but we keep it a secret
because we so hate the attention.

those perfect red lines
upon your arm, or leg
they become such a burden,
but we do it anyway.

however it's only because we are so very, very tired.

Answer 7

i like that. its really good

Answer 8

please be careful. its no fun once you actually cut. and eventually it becomes addicting, but you will realize afterwards, if you are still alive, that it was one of the worst decisions of your life.

Answer 9

that is from personal experience, so please take it to heart, and remember that someone loves you. and if you think nobody does, than i do. i love you, just don't go too far please.

Answer 10

:D i dd it before, i wont do it again... 9 years is too long...

Answer 11

im so sorry that you hadn't met someone who could help you before you did it. im sure you understand where im coming from than though, and thank you. im glad to hear you wont repeat that mistake that i had so many troubles with, and that i went back to so many times.

Answer 12

i know. i am trying to help my friends. c, i was bullied my whole life. i still get bullied, but i am learning to just ignore it. now im trying to hel my friends ignore it too. i lost many friends from suicid, i cant lose another one. thats y i write poems and songs about it, to get my past a little bit farther away from me today...

Answer 13

im glad to hear that, and yah im still bullied too. im sure you can just imagine how tough it is to be a fifteen year old in collage. i hope your friends that are still alive stay alive. and im sure you can help them.

Answer 14

wait, u r in collage, and ur 15? wow! u r very smart! im 17 and im in 10th grade lol

Answer 15

its no fun skipping four grades. i promise you. the smarter you are, the more you are picked on.

Answer 16

well, i wont pick on u. i don;t believe in that. u r very smart tho. maybe u can fan me back, and we can message each other

Answer 17

i am now one of your fans. ^_^

Answer 18

by the way, your poetry is positively beautiful.

Answer 19

thank you so much. i bet r better tho :D

Answer 20

i'm ok, but seriously, you're amazing.

Answer 21

thx :D

Answer 22

is the title supposed to be Depression not Depreasion ?

Answer 23

It's very amazing, I feel this way too @teresar7

Answer 24

Sometimes...

Answer 25

thanks

Answer 26

This would be in the writing section.

Answer 27

sorry...

Answer 28

poetry can also go into the english section. or would you dare argue that fact @SneliS?

Answer 29

lol

Answer 30

I'm not arguing that I'm just saying you would get better reviews if it was in writing, go to the writing section and all you see are poems.

Answer 31

sorry..

Answer 32

Poetry can also go in the English section @SneliS or would you dare argue that fact?

Answer 33

You already said that?? U a robot or somethin'

Answer 34

it isnt showing up, so i said it again

Answer 35

lol

Answer 36

i do apologize