Question

Need help with my poem!!

Answer 1

Here is my poem:
The day game for cricket could have been better
Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium
As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side
I walked forward anxiously yet without fear
And with my confidence all time high
Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy
Shouting and threatening calls of dread
Yet, to embrace the moment of execution
I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge
To the eventual success yet has to be made.

Answer 2

its my personal poem and its about a cricket match

Answer 3

It's a really good poem

Answer 4

ok thnx

Answer 5

I didn't really do anything but okay

Answer 6

So basically I have to write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language. Then write a reflective journal of approximately 200 words in which you discuss the word choices you made and what effect you wanted to achieve.

Answer 7

I finish the poem and I need help with my reflection journey

Answer 8

I write some of it but I need more detail on it

Answer 9

So what do you have so far?

Answer 10

I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.

Answer 11

@nono266 are you good with poem?

Answer 12

can someone help me plz

Answer 13

sounds great to me!!

Answer 14

but u said in the reflection what the title was. did u put the title on the actual poem?

Answer 15

I do have a title

Answer 16

it is The Judgment Day

Answer 17

ok. then everything is good!

Answer 18

is it a good title thou

Answer 19

i was talking about on the poem

Answer 20

like above it

Answer 21

what?

Answer 22

This is my poem its title is the judgement Day
The day game for cricket could have been better
Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium
As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side
I walked forward anxiously yet without fear
And with my confidence all time high
Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy
Shouting and threatening calls of dread
Yet, to embrace the moment of execution
I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge
To the eventual success yet has to be made.

Answer 23

@muscrat123 I need help with my journey paragraph

Answer 24

sorry, i gtg

Answer 25

@jim_thompson5910 @pooja195

Answer 26

I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.

Answer 27

this is my journey paragraph but I need some for details

Answer 28

@jjamz87 are u there

Answer 29

hey i know you're working on your poem, but u think that u can give me some help

Answer 30

@mrlogic1 latter but help me first plz

Answer 31

Her is my journey paragraph but I need some more detail own it and I need your help:

I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.

Answer 32

yea

Answer 33

need help!!

Answer 34

I need some more detail own my journey paragraph and I need your help:

Answer 35

The day game for cricket could have been better
Even more so with the crowd packed in the stadium
As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side
I, walked forward anxiously yet without fear
And with my confidence at an all time high,
Swung the bat against the sea of bowling enemy
Shouting and threatening calls of dread
Yet, to embrace the moment of execution
I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge
To the eventual success yet has to be made.

Answer 36

The day game for cricket could have been better
Even more so with the crowd packed in the stadium
As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side
I, walked forward anxiously yet without fear
And with my confidence at an all time high,
Swung the bat against the sea of bowling enemy
Shouting and threatening calls of dread
Yet, to embrace the moment of execution
I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge
To the eventual success that has yet to be made.

Answer 37

know can you help me with journey paragraph!!

Answer 38

The day game for cricket could have been better
Even more so with the crowd packed in the stadium
As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side
I, walked forward anxiously yet without fear
And with my confidence at an all time high,
Swung the bat against the sea of bowling enemy
Shouting and threatening calls of dread
Yet, to embrace the moment of execution
I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge
To the eventual success that after success to be made.

Answer 39

know is it fine

Answer 40

@ashhhrodriguez

Answer 41

Here is my poem:

The day game for cricket could have been better
Even more so with the crowd packed in the stadium
As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side
I, walked forward anxiously yet without fear
And with my confidence at an all time high,
Swung the bat against the sea of bowling enemy
Shouting and threatening calls of dread
Yet, to embrace the moment of execution
I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge
To the eventual success that after success to be made.

Answer 42

@ashhhrodriguez

Answer 43

Here is my journey paragraph but I need some more detail own it and I need your help

I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.

Answer 44

hey sorry but were u put I had word the poem I think it should be worded the poem

Answer 45

I already told the poem words in my journey

Answer 46

Bro I promise my work is golden here. Ignore the helpless kids trying to get a free medal and when I think it's good that means it's good because I was the third top in my Grade 12 English U ENG4U course before graduation.

Answer 47

I ended up with an 83 so trust me it's all good.

Answer 48

@Robert136 I appreciate your help and I know its all fine here but the problem is that my english teacher wants my journey paragraph to be in 200 work so because of that I need some more information in my paragraph that what I am looking for

Answer 49

200 word

Answer 50

@Robert136 what can i include more in my paragraph