Tell me what you think of my song im writing....

i aint perfect nor pretty
but deep down im filled with beauty
i aint that girl you dream of
nor the girl youll fall in love with
i aint the girl i used to be
why you keep judging me
from who i was and who i am now
till the day im buried in the ground
i aint hurting now
till all the haters take a bow
for god has faith in me
the future he let me see
when ill be above
an your down below
you gave my heart a shove
but i guess it was all for show

* i dont know what else i should add, my mind is going crazy plz help.....

Question

Tell me what you think of my song im writing....

i aint perfect nor pretty
but deep down im filled with beauty
i aint that girl you dream of
nor the girl youll fall in love with
i aint the girl i used to be
why you keep judging me
from who i was and who i am now
till the day im buried in the ground
i aint hurting now
till all the haters take a bow
for god has faith in me
the future he let me see
when ill be above
an your down below
you gave my heart a shove
but i guess it was all for show


* i dont know what else i should add, my mind is going crazy plz help.....

serenity74 · Answer

I like it but what about the beat?

anonymous · Answer

Looks Great !!!!!

Don't Stop There, Ik It Takes Time To Write But Continue And Strive To Succeed :)

jason4jesus · Answer

Good job. :) Better than I can anyway. lol

quin100 · Answer

wow i like it! good job XD

karrie631 · Answer

hehe thanx guys