A poem I just wrote What do you think?

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hope210 · Answer

We all bleed,
          We all cry,
  We all fall down sometimes.
  You can make fun of me
          all you want,
   But we're all the same,
  No matter the color or race,
                Cause......
    We all yell and scream,
   We've all walked in the rain
    and seen some sunny days
   We all have cuts and scars 
                   And 
   We all know who we are;
        We are the same .

anonymous · Answer

Ooh, I like it. It's very meaningful and inspiring.

rainbowdashrocks · Answer

good job

anonymous · Answer

I really like it! The only thing I would recommend changing is the "cause........" Other than that! GREAT!!!

hope210 · Answer

Thanks for your advice @BouncyHousey

ray_masters · Answer

really cool nice going

anonymous · Answer

Very impressive, and it goes very deep and emotional @Hope210

atsie · Answer

Pithy and to the point. Good work! :)

anonymous · Answer

that is really good!

leiasandoval98 · Answer

it sounds awesome. i can actually relate to it very well.

hope210 · Answer

Thank you all, I'm glad you like it.

purple_pink · Answer

i leterally to a screenshot

purple_pink · Answer

literally*

anonymous · Answer

maannn its cool but... u gotta learn to rhyme ._.

notshh · Answer

^ poems don't necessarily have to rhyme.. it flows nicely.

No matter the color or race, <-- maybe just me, but I'd change "the" to "our"

anonymous · Answer

fantastic! :)

jazzyluvsu123 · Answer

amazing

anonymous · Answer

It is sad

anonymous · Answer

are you emo? I started crying really really really loud

countrychic128 · Answer

Awsome

candycove · Answer

Well done :)

anonymous · Answer

very impressive

anonymous · Answer

this is very well written, beautiful

hope210 · Answer

$\color{blue}{Thank}$ $\huge you$ $\huge all$