Question

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this is a peom I wrote. Id like feedback please

Answer 1

It's good :)

Answer 2

thank you ^_^

Answer 3

No problem :)

Answer 4

I loved it :)

Answer 5

Very very nice. I just think that in the last stanza "BEEN THERE BEFORE" does not need to be capitalized, if you want it that way, then it does not matter. Also in the last stanza, Suicidal People does not need to be in quotes, and neither does "friend". I'm sorry to hear that you've been through difficult times and had thoughts/actions to be suicidal. I understand completely where you're coming from.

Answer 6

@RhondaSommer

Answer 7

so sorry; I wasnt on my computer at the time; my bad. I wanted to give the illusion that Been there before was to yell at the "friend" and suicidal was written that way because I was emphasizing the "friends" word choice and how it was wrong to call them that...

Answer 8

Oh, okay got it. Thanks for helping me understand.