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Hi

Answer 1

um....

Answer 2

I absolutely loved it! This is an awesome piece!

Answer 3

ooo i thought this was a question

Answer 4

You love this? e.e I am filled with aghast.

Answer 5

dang this is deeper than the Mariana Trench and darker than the San Pedro de Atacama.
butt it was good bb love this art

Answer 6

I am really into dark art ;>

Answer 7

Thank you :)

Answer 8

i loved it

Answer 9

Thank you too

Answer 10

you and shad are both masters at poetry

Answer 11

Don't compare me to my inspiration

Answer 12

Wow nice job.
@Anaise

Answer 13

@Anaise I completely loved it

Answer 14

noticed spelling errors...rather grammar

Answer 15

Something written by me, a person with trust issues
This was also based off a dream, so I understand...if you don't understand
A fair maiden
Young and obliging
On her way to help those sinners
Located in Aden
“Kind I am, surely this is rewarded”
As she departed on the island
She met a few women
All possessing difficulties
For they were troubled, she thought
Days of her trip went on and on
She befriended each of them
Or so she thought
Then came along a young hombre
Who was indeed married
That certain night, they all shared a room
She had to sleep on the bed with the fellow
Which changed her mood
Glum, to mellow
She was in for her reward, as she deserved
He grabbed her and kissed her in unlikely ways
She screamed and pulled away
Her friends sat there, and watched
Taking out their devices and let the scene play through them
Each time she tried to crawl to them
They wouldn’t reach out
She tumbled, she struggled, and she shout
It wasn’t until dawn
Her ire started to dawn
“My smite and spite will sit in my heart forever
And ne’er will I let compassion join again
I have my wisdom struck away from me
Now it is my hatred, that everyone will see”
The irony is
Was she wise in the first place?
Trusting strangers, who she ne’er met?
And from this point to death
She will never realize
She became sin herself

Answer 16

^^ wow wow wow.
I'm speechless.
I love this @Anaise

Answer 17

ty ^.^

Answer 18

of course! You are extremely talented!

Answer 19

I find no good in my poems or stories or anecdotes :(

Answer 20

You are positively crazy. You have a unique sense of wording when you write. I like you write. It makes one think, relate, and want to finish the poem rather than read halfway and go eat icecream.