Rewrite this sentence to use more effective writing:

At the final end of the picture, the villain abruptly and suddenly does an about face and changes completely into a good person with admirable qualities.

Question

Rewrite this sentence to use more effective writing:

  At the final end of the picture, the villain abruptly and suddenly does an about face and changes completely into a good person with admirable qualities.

ilovebmth1234 · Answer

@ganeshie8

aveline · Answer

Start by modifying redundant phrases, like "final" and "end" or "abruptly" and "suddenly"

a_burning_masquerade · Answer

Ok first I would agree with the person above me but only take out final and abruptly. So it should be worded like 
At the end of the picture, the villain suddenly does an about face and changes completely into a good person with admirable qualities. 
i'm not sure if i got it right but I hope it helped.

ilovebmth1234 · Answer

it did thanks so much xD

aveline · Answer

@ilovebmth1234 
Do you know what an about face is?
You can simplify the sentence further.

ilovebmth1234 · Answer

no i dont

aveline · Answer

It's "a complete change of opinion or policy" or "a turn made so as to face the opposite direction."
It's the same thing as changing completely.

hurlimanduncan9696 · Answer

aveline is right

ilovebmth1234 · Answer

can you maybe help explain what they mean or how this is supposed to be writen out more efficiently? for some reason my brain isnt comprehending this >.<
@Photon336

aveline · Answer

At the end of the picture, the villain does an about face and changes into a good person.

ilovebmth1234 · Answer

oh okay lol thank you xD