Question

Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?

A longer phrase was converted to a single word.

A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.

Redundant phrases were eliminated.

Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

Answer 1

@Photon336

Answer 2

@AloneS

Answer 3

u know?

Answer 4

i think A

Answer 5

Saying "my father" twice would be a redundant phrase
So which one would it be
Also by the way if you didn't notice this is math not english ;P

Answer 6

well hold on
Repetitive phrase is misleading
I was simply helping you eliminate some answers, check for what it was replaced with