Okay to all you aspiring poets out there no matter your specialty or style of writing post all your poems here
@RhondaSommer @Ballerina_MJ @SkyVoltage @heyyyyitsholly @Hope210 even if you feel like you poems are horrible please just post one
I wrote this long time ago Under the skin, Darkness within, Silently creeping Desperately seeking; Beating in my heart Thinking in my brain, Itching with every move made Can't fight it; Must oblige to it.
@SkyVoltage why so gloomy
idk
i will delete it.....
you can leave it if you want its your choice
i can get reported....
"but alas the choices we make nonetheless have consequences to face " - anon
How do we come to be here next to each other in the night Where are the stars that show us to our love inevitable Outside the leaves flame usual in darkness and the rain falls cool and blessed on the holy flesh the black men waiting on the corner for a womanly mirage I am amazed by peace It is this possibility of you asleep and breathing in the quiet air
not good but here
who wrote it
@SkyVoltage
we were always there for each other i loved you as if i was the mother deep inside my soul is crying you have passed away from another i can't stand on my own feet crying out to u and me you were the only one who stood by my side now it's time to say goodbye
original?
i made it a long time ago
Masks can be dawned, tears can be hidden, but look closely at them and see, that the smiles are fake, the laughs are forced, all just to put people at ease. But look closely and see, the truth and the pain, the tears and the grief; and all that is hidden. Go, hug them and hold them, and tell them that it's ok to cry and to grieve. that it is ok not to be strong sometimes, because they are so strong, all the time. ~ Nuala Brady
"Help" By: Rhonda Sommer Help me see why people don’t understand pain. I mean, Isn't it strange? How people in pain want help But went others ask for it from them They shrug like they don't understand. "Don’t worry." "Your fine." "It'll be okay." But I'm not okay. I tell you this often And instead of helping me You look at me in awe Like there is something wrong Like I shouldn’t be this way. I KNOW I shouldn't be this way! I've been telling myself this for ages! Help me feel better! I want you to disagree With my self accusations Not agree and make me feel even more precarious Help me through! Fight on MY side! Don't be my opposition.
i love it
5 minute write Money, a powerful source It’s like Darth Vader in your hand, a powerful force It puts you in the fast lane Like grabbing and gripping the stick shift and you feel the power of a Porsche Some people get drunk off it, it’s addicting Make it the number one reason why you living It makes people violent, to begin the fighting Punches fast as lighting, it’s quite frightening “Give and Receive” is the quote But you only exercise the latter part, you made that gap like an asymptote Because the limit of you receiving does not exist It goes to infinity, an infinite list
impressive
Thanks, yours was even more
Thanks.
A friend A friend is someone you can tell anything too They are there when you need them the most A friend is will always know when you’re hurting They will know all your pains and regrets A friend will be there to put a smile on your face They will make you laugh about nothing A friend will stand by you in your darkest hour They will be the shoulder you cry on when you need it A friend is around so you have someone to tell your secrets to They will be the people you won’t be afraid to die for A friend isn’t there just for you You’ll be there for them just as much
That poem was one I wrote in the fifth grade sure I've change a lot of things seen then but it still makes people smile when they read it (or all my friends have)
I like it, Scarlett! Everything in that poem is true
Thanks @FortyTheRapper My friends think it's a little to deep through do you think it is? I thought it was okay but I don't know
I wouldn't say deep. It's like obvious facts on what friends are, but no one ever follows them or sticks to them, making it seem deep I guess
It is perfect, deep enough to get points, and feelings across, without crossing over into these are my problems, and i need some one to be there for me.
The poem is all true I will always be there for my friends like right now my friend needs me and I'm there for her
A slightly random poem... Thief If I had to say Who influences Me the most Who steals The most of my time I would say you do You pop into my life Suddenly. I will do anything you ask More than that, even. Whatever it is I’m supposed to do I drop it for you Leave it behind Feeling guilty But unable to stop. You occupy All of my free time Even time that isn’t free Time that isn’t mine. You are like a drug An enemy A distracting friend. What would I do Without you, Procrastination?
lol, epic.
What do i do, in a world with out you, a world without sunshine, a world without light, what do i do in a world without you? When i lost you i lost my way, I lost my hope i lost my dreams what do i do, in a world without you? Without you i am nothing I have no substance i have no hope, i have no light. What do i do in a world without you? What do i do in a world without you? What do I do? When I lose you?
Y'all are so talented and have so much emotion. I love all of the poems.
@islandchick60 thankyou
Darkness engulfed The most effervescent town. Looking at the sun in disgust, His hair glimmered- Kisses from the sun He stood out everywhere Without caring who saw- Waved goodbye to the sun An animal-like smile slipped Across his lips, Witnessed the sun being devoured Some say: He’s insane! He claims to be having A little fun
any time :) @dako87
@islandchick60 do you have any poems to post
not at the moment but i could write one really quick if you'd like
feel free ill write one as well
cool!
Choices Two choices. Too many voices, All because of those stupid choices. I've been hurt once, I've been hurt twice, I've been hurt thrice. All by you. You still hold the key to my heart, From you I never want to part. I have two choices, Do I choose you? What do I do? All that I know is, I love you. -Hannah Reintjes
Will the madness never end have i struggled in vain are my efforts so pointless Questions questions one leads to another its a never ending cycle Am i here just to toil do i cry these tears in the rain do i live my life just to have it end in pain what if the choices i made furthered me along only to speed me to my demise whats the point should i try all im told is lie after lie when all i can do is cry whats the point why do i try
wow that is amazing
thank you i like yours as well its a thing most teens and young adults can relate to
ya haha im going through some of that teenage crap right now so ya its on my mind lol
thank you tho
lol yeah i just got dumped this morning lol i know the problems associated with it
oh im so sorry mine isn't that bad im so sorry
lol its all good i knew it was going to happen
aww that sucks no one deserves that
will you be ok?
The situation...inevitable my attitude...indifferent the struggle...pointless the truth is its just like the rest begged tho i did but the end came all the same just like a fog after the rain when all that matters is that i tried but all she did was let it die and im still left here to wonder why but head up smile wide because i know that at least i tried
wow that explains a lot and i is really heartfelt
it was kinda rushed lol
oh well i liked it so good job lol
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