can you put this in your own words for me i will do anything He was a resident of Whitechapel, where most of the murders took place, and he looked “painfully” normal as opposed to the image of maniacs in which they look like raving lunatics.
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this is tough let me see
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He was an inhabitant of Whitechapel, where the vast majority of the killings occurred, and he looked "agonizingly" ordinary instead of the picture of insane people in which they look like raving crazy people.
he was.. sorry wrong words
okay and thxs @brooklynsshaw can i use that
Sure !
is that the same as what i posted just rephrase different
"He was a resident of Whitechapel, where most of the murders took place, and he looked “painfully” normal as opposed to the image of maniacs in which they look like raving lunatics." He was a resident of the place where most murders took place, Whitechapel, and he looked "excruciatingly" natural compared to the visage of fanatics in which they appeared to be people who are truly insane.
I would have put some periods in there, as that's one long sentence...but I don't know exactly what you need.
Also, math section ;P
thxs and sorry do you know anything about the victorian age????
He was a resident of the place where a surplus of deaths took place, Whitechapel, and he looked "excruciatingly" natural compared to the visage of fanatics in which they appeared to be people who are truly insane.
That changes the beginning more, to where it appears more to be your words.
Slightly altered more from the earlier one.
My version: "He was a resident of Whitechapel, where most of the murders took place, and he looked “painfully” normal as opposed to the image of maniacs in which they look like raving lunatics." Unlike the other suspects, this one was a resident of Whitechapel, where most of the murders took place, and additionally, (he) looked quite "normal," not like a raving lunatic.
okay thxs i need to explain about jack ripper can you help me explain him like who he what he did
Use shorter sentences, and 1) describe him 2) say where he lived 3) explain where the murders happened
i did and i failed this thats why im here
Please share what YOU have written, if you haven't already. "I failed this" tells the rest of us nothing.
all i know is he slit hookers throat and no one has ever seen him
can you post the question in English, and I'll look at it.
umm sure
You have received numerous suggestions from others and several from me. I think it's time that you write your own paragraph about Jack the Ripper after having read about him in Wikipedia or some other Internet source. Then there'd be something to which helpers could respond. Continuing to ask for help is not going to make you proficient in paraphrasing or summarizing.
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