Question

new POEM ! thoughts? Any ideas about rhyming in the first two lines?
Not always does the sun shine
Not always do the flowers bloom
Sometimes the sky turns to gray
Sometimes beauty withers away


But in your bright fearless eyes
a sparkle, a gleam , a twinkle resides
Away from the worlds cold, dark fears
Away from the watching eyes and listening ears

Away from the cold dark of night
Away from death, fear , and fright
In your eyes i wish to stay
in your eyes and forever lay

second half coming soon!
(it just wont let me type more :))

Answer 1

love this, please put the rest on i want to finish reading

Answer 2

Not always does the sun shine
Not always are the flowers fine

Answer 3

beautiful

Answer 4

Thanks :)

Answer 5

Thanks
and thanks Salsabyl for your suggestion i love it