Question

hi

Answer 1

@harman.singh

Answer 2

do i write sincerely name

Answer 3

my name

Answer 4

or MLA format does not require that?

Answer 5

It depends on what your teacher wants you to write. You can also write Kind regards if you like

Answer 6

Depends on how formal or casual the style of writing is.

Answer 7

fomral like super formal

Answer 8

omg

Answer 9

i forgot to save it

Answer 10

it has to auto omg

Answer 11

hold on while i find the essay please

Answer 12

o.o

Answer 13

YES IT SAVED!!!!!

Answer 14

Then, you would write either Sincerely, Kind regards, or Yours truly. It all depends on how professional you want to sound. If it were up to me I'd go with Sincerely. It sounds smoother and it is a tighter close to a letter.

Answer 15

its not a letter its a pitch

Answer 16

have a look

Answer 17

I just read the entire thing and I realise it isn't a letter. In this case, go with "Yours truly". And just a little side tip: try to avoid using the same words over and over and try to less redundant. Also, the ending could be just a little juicier.

Answer 18

*sound less redundant

Answer 19

Well written. Looks pretty good so far. Here is what I would suggest to make it even better:

- In the first paragraph, you should be more specific about the book and its story
You wrote "It’s about the change of how before and after he was turned into a beetle, which made him very strange to the rest of humanity." Keep in mind the movie studio has not read the novel yet so they know who you are referring to when you say "he". You should be more specific here.


- "One of the parts that will catch the viewers mind, is the part where he turns into a beetle. Another would be..." I think you need to be explain how that is good for the movie. For example, you could say this part of the story will make the audience laugh while being a little scary at the same time.. great for kids etc..

Overall, its well written. Just need to be more specific in some parts :)

Answer 20

*so they don't know

Answer 21

"The movie’s genre will be horror but not insane horror, just a person turning into a beetle." lol..this was funny.

Answer 22

always have some type of giggle in it, always turns the director on

Answer 23

haha..great job

Answer 24

okay well go do your thing, ill tag you when im finished thanks!!!!!!

Answer 25

No problem :)

Answer 26

@harman.singh

Answer 27

i edited it a bit