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I wrote this open to suggestions
You got me trippn
Got me missn
My head covered in clouds
But in reality,
Im falling down
If you really loved me
If you really cared
Youd be heartbroken if I said I didnt care
For some reason i'm caught up in yo trap
Dont know how to get out
You guilt trip me
You got me feeln bad
My brain is saying back away
My heart is saying no more pain
Should I listen to my deadbeat heart
Or listen to my body
It says oh plz no
Hes gonna hurt u
Hes gonna desert u
Hes gonna be the one who always concerns you
He needs somebody to lay on him at night
But I aint like that stuff
Ptsd thats right
Maniclly depressed
Still dealing with suicide
But I cant deal with that now cuz everyone else is in my mind
Hes out of it
But hes scared to go
Feels like if looses you he gonna lose it all
I really like him but he's not the one
Keeps being mean to my friends
That right there is a NO.
My family is different
They scream and fight
And i need someone to understand right?
But i dont think its this guy.
Guess what im trying to say,
Is im trying to go,
But im scared to back away
Cuz i dont like letting people go
Its my greatest fear in life
And im constantly obsessing
About people leaving me
Then being alone and confused and empty
I was abused as a kid
As you probably know
My sister hittn me telln me that no one loves me yo
My fondest memory of her is her saying shes sorry
But it never really happened
She doesnt have a clue
Im scared of abandonment cuz of people like you.

Another:
You shattered me
Broke me
Left me to waste
I thought you were the one I'm sick of your game
I just wanted you
but you ran away
i'm sorry to be quitting your race
It hurts to know it was all a lie
even in the end when you said goodbye
even in the end when you made cry
all i want to do is apologize
Why does this happen to me
I don't let people in cuz im scared to be
in a relationship that actually means
something to someone other than me
My heart i am sick of it
cut it out get rid of it
Im falling down done with this
Oh but your having fun with this
Get rid of me
shattered knees
get down and watch me bleed
as you shatter all my dreams
Just let me go let me be
the person that I want to be
the person you don't want to see
Im sorry for just being me
Another: I dont wanna be fake just wanna be real
But what does it mean to be the real deal
What does it mean to be able to feel
How does it feel to be able to heal
Look life!
Surrounding me
Pounding me
Hounding me
Drowning me
Imma person people dont see
Im stuck inside this tree
Black trunk and wilting leafs
I got all these nails in me
From flyers and missing things
From people who missing these
Lost since a rainy night playn hide and seek
Dont hide from me
Cuz i been in a kinda life that you dont even know
People talkin behind my back
People passn notes
People all they wanna do is ditch me let me go
And im just so blind i cant even see it yo
These people i think care about me for all these years
Will someday shrivel up, vanish, and disappear
Ya I cant even hear
All the lies they are telln me
The secrets that they're sharing when i told them to keep sumth'n
Thnks 4 reading all the way thro

Answer 1

Wow That is awsome

Answer 2

the last line though

Answer 3

wow

Answer 4

i have more.... if u guys want..?

Answer 5

Yes

Answer 6

aight edited it there

Answer 7

if u want... we can make raps together... 😏😏😏

Answer 8

Wait is this a poem

Answer 9

I think it is Also it might be a song

Answer 10

yo that sounds cool writing wraps together, message me, and my amazing burning elmo its poems but also kinda like raps. thnks 4 asking.

Answer 11

I love this

Answer 12

felt-
these are pretty good. you can clearly see the message and feel the pain of the writer. Gr8 job luv <3

Answer 13

thats soo goooodddd❤️

Answer 14

Good! That is deep!

Answer 15

Good Job Gurllll!

Answer 16

Okay first off are you alright, I feel as though you're crying out for help 🥺
Secondly, Bravo!! This is really nice luv, keep it up you're doing great 💕

Answer 17

damn

Answer 18

sad

Answer 19

Why's this remind me of a Russ song

Answer 20

LOL brayden thats totally not wht i was going for but i see it

Answer 21

BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO this is better than anything i could ever do

Answer 22

Man i swear we can be friends and I be dealing with he same stuff, I felt this poem :(

Answer 23

anyone who wants to be friends feel free to message me here or at krmake05@gmail.com

Answer 24

you did dat this is fire keeping writing more

Answer 25

Super cool song

Answer 26

thats so good

Answer 27

that's a good one. I like it-

Answer 28

AWESOME!

Answer 29

Damn! That's pretty good! Keep up the good work

Answer 30

good job buddy

Answer 31

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