ok so im writing a story just made up for my project in english so far dis is what i have.
i don see anything frappe chuino it not loadin for me o;
o wait nvm u~u
ik my spelling is messed up
if you need help on spelling thru is spelled through
where is were
ik i fixed it
but this story kinda feel deep ngl o;
Nice story in general. Its just that it would be better if u want into detail about what was going on like deeper into the situation and made that paragraph longer
nice job on it tho it makes it feel relatable
theres a runon sentence though
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Aidsinyou theres a runon sentence though \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) and
I like it :)
ik there is
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes Nice story in general. Its just that it would be better if u want into detail about what was going on like deeper into the situation and made that paragraph longer \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) will do
Maybe you should put commas or something idk
10/10 would read yo book if published
they are all run on for rn im not even half way done i gotta do like 3000 more words
Like this: Cammie was the oldest, she was going through a depression stage and the only person she had to talk to was her boyfriend. She told her boyfriend everything, then started to help her mom, which only made her even more sad.
Something like that idk
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