Question

ok so im writing a story just made up for my project in english so far dis is what i have.

Answer 1

i don see anything frappe chuino it not loadin for me o;

Answer 2

o wait nvm u~u

Answer 3

ik my spelling is messed up

Answer 4

if you need help on spelling thru is spelled through

Answer 5

where is were

Answer 6

ik i fixed it

Answer 7

but this story kinda feel deep ngl o;

Answer 8

Nice story in general.

Its just that it would be better if u want into detail about what was going on like deeper into the situation and made that paragraph longer

Answer 9

nice job on it tho it makes it feel relatable

Answer 10

theres a runon sentence though

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Aidsinyou
theres a runon sentence though
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
and

Answer 12

I like it :)

Answer 13

ik there is

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
Nice story in general.

Its just that it would be better if u want into detail about what was going on like deeper into the situation and made that paragraph longer
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
will do

Answer 15

Maybe you should put commas or something idk

Answer 16

10/10 would read yo book if published

Answer 17

they are all run on for rn im not even half way done i gotta do like 3000 more words

Answer 18

Like this: Cammie was the oldest, she was going through a depression stage and the only person she had to talk to was her boyfriend. She told her boyfriend everything, then started to help her mom, which only made her even more sad.

Answer 19

Something like that idk