Question

Hey what do you guys think of my expressionism writing?

~Can’t Grab The Light~
They leave, never to come back. You try to talk to them but there's never an answer. Why don't they answer back when I need them the most, It's not fair. You took them from me. Why are you so cruel.Words cant describe what i've been through. So much pain, too many tears. I always have to hide this, from everyone. Be happy they say, don't cry things will get better. I keep hoping these things get better but it never does. All it is is a cycle. A cycle of darkness and sadness. I try to reach for the light but its too far. Out of my reach I try to grasp it but it slips out of my hands. Looks like I'll never find my light. Forever Stuck in this darkness, No way out.

Answer 1

it is really good

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dangonz
it is really good
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Thank you i put my soul into it

Answer 3

Thats good, good word choice.

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashley29
Thats good, good word choice.
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choices

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LILYLUV
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dangonz
it is really good
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Thank you i put my soul into it
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no problem

Answer 6

Thank you guys

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LILYLUV
Thank you guys
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youre welcome

Answer 8

Ive just been in my feelings lot lol

Answer 9

Lost alot of ppl in my life

Answer 10

It really brings out your pain

Answer 11

thanks

Answer 12

thats what i was trying to show. they say pictures speak a thousand words but these words come from the heart.

Answer 13

yeah you did a good job. The hurt really shines through. It's more than just writing some words. It's very nice. Great job. If you ever need anything, dms are open. Great writing luv <3

Answer 14

thank you. Will do

Answer 15

dats good i likeyy itttt

Answer 16

thanks

Answer 17

You did a really nice job, Keep up the good work!

Answer 18

thank you all fr

Answer 19

Nice nice !

Answer 20

good

Answer 21

thxxx

Answer 22

Nicee~😏

Answer 23

It is goof.

Answer 24

Good.*

Answer 25

good

Answer 26

Good work with the subjective perspective! Just curious, is the format meant to be poem-like and you simply pasted it here, or is it intentionally blocked in this manner? It would give readers more pause if there were spacings between the sentences.