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i need feedback on this report on The Swiss Family Robinson it's due today

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The Swiss Family Robinson Mr. Robinson Mr. Robinson, an intelligent, resourceful Swiss who, with his family, is shipwrecked on an island near New Guinea. He represents many middle-class virtues and beliefs, including a strong religious sentiment. Because of his good sense, practical knowledge, and understanding of human nature, he and his family succeed in establishing themselves on the island with European-type civilization. When a ship calls at the island, Mr. Robinson decides to remain, hoping that commerce will come and that his little colony will grow and prosper. Mrs. Robinson Mrs. Robinson, an intelligent, brave, and hardworking woman who is in her way as resourceful as her husband. She improvises a great deal in making her family comfortable and happy. Her tasks are housekeeping and care of the crops and animals. Like her husband, she chooses to remain on the island. Fritz Robinson Fritz Robinson, the oldest of the Robinson boys. He grows up on the island to become a gentlemanly, courageous young man. He learns how to accept responsibility and to carry out difficult tasks requiring initiative and courage. Unlike his father, he wants to return to Europe and does so when the opportunity comes. Emily Montrose Emily Montrose, a young English girl shipwrecked on the island. She is rescued by Fritz, who brings her to his family’s settlement. Emily is the daughter of an English army officer and is on her way home from India. She and Fritz fall in love and plan to marry upon their return to Europe. Ernest Robinson Ernest Robinson, the second of the Robinson boys. He has a great interest in natural history, and his previous studies help the family very much, for he can identify plants and animals for various purposes. Jack Robinson Jack Robinson, the third of the Robinson children. He contributes to the family’s welfare by helping his mother tend the animals and crops. Francis Robinson Francis Robinson, the youngest of the Robinson children. He is the pet of the rest of the family and thoroughly enjoys his childhood on the island. Of all the passengers and crew onboard the ship, only the Robinson family is saved when the vessel breaks apart on a reef, and the crew and other passengers jump into lifeboats without waiting for the little family to join them. As the ship tosses about, the father prays that God will spare them. There is plenty of food on board, and after they eat, the boys go to sleep, leaving the father and the mother to guard them. In the morning their first concern is to get to the island they can see beyond the reef. With much effort, they construct a vessel out of tubs. After they fill the tubs with food and ammunition and all other articles of value they can safely carry, they row toward the island. Two dogs from the ship swim beside them, and the boys are glad they will have pets when they reach their new home. Their first task on reaching the island is to erect a tent of sailcloth they brought from the ship. They gather moss and dry it so that they will have some protection from the ground when they sleep. They can find a lobster and shoot some game, thus adding fresh food to their supplies. Since they have no utensils for eating, they use shells for spoons, all dipping out of the iron kettle that they brought from the ship. They released some geese and pigeons while they were still on the ship and brought two hens and two Toasts with them. The father knows that they must prepare for a long time on the island, and his thoughts are as much on provisions for the future as for their immediate wants. The father and Fritz, the oldest son, spend the next day exploring the island. They find gourds from which they can make dishes and spoons, and many edible fruits and roots. Coconuts, growing in abundance, provide a treat for the mother and the younger boys. Fritz captures a small monkey, which he takes back for a pet. The younger boys are enchanted with the mischievous little animal. The Robinsons spend the next few days securing themselves against hunger and danger from wild animals. The father and Fritz make several trips to the ship in their efforts to bring ashore everything that they can use. The domesticated animals on the ship are towed back to the island. There is also a great store of firearms and ammunition, hammocks for sleeping, carpenter’s tools, lumber, cooking utensils, silverware, and dishes. While the father and Fritz are salvaging these supplies, the mother and the younger boys are working on the shore, sowing seeds, examining the contents of the kegs that floated to shore, and in every way possible making the tent a more livable home. The mother and boys also explore the island to find a spot for a more permanent home. When the father and Fritz can join them, the whole family helps to construct a treehouse that will give them protection from wild animals that they fear might dwell on the island. Through the following weeks, each day brings a new adventure of some kind. There are encounters with wild birds and terrifying animals. Ernest, the second son, studied nature with great interest before their ill-fated voyage, and he identifies many of the animals and birds. They find some food that they consider luxuries—sugarcane, honey, potatoes, and spices. The fence in a secluded area for their cattle so that they might have a constant supply of milk and fresh meat. Several new dwellings are constructed to provide homes on all sides of the island. The father finds a tree that contains long threads, and after he constructs a loom, the mother can weave cloth for new clothing. Jack and Francis, the younger boys, contribute to the welfare of the family by helping their mother to care for the animals and thresh the grain grown from seeds bought from the ship. Many times the family members find their labor destroyed by uncontrollable 7 years go by and the age a bit and jack became a pirate after they raid a British Navi and captured the Navi caption daughter they were now on the run after a week in captive she escaped and ran into the two older sons and had a bit of a brawl they got to know each other And after the pirates attacked them jake had to make the biggest choice he chose his family over his pirate family after the evil pirate caption was killed they were all happy all charges were dropped on them and they all lived happily ever after the end

psychace999:

What is the question?

b1az3:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @psychace999 What is the question? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) i need feedback on this report on The Swiss Family Robinson

psychace999:

Add a moral I would say make sure your climax is what adds to the plot but otherwise your good.

b1az3:

is it a what out of a scale over 10?

psychace999:

9.3

b1az3:

thanks

psychace999:

No problem.

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