Ok so like this was from 3 months ago and i was wondering if i should keep working on it

I dont wanna be inlove and i know tha suckyou really broke my heart should've never trust you from the start i gave u my all and u left me to fall and you know what really hurts, im stuck on you and i was nothing but true you was really with sum other girl, she makes me wanna hearl and her name was prolly pearl. When i was crying over you, you was laughing witcha dudes and i know im not trippin you had me out here looking like a fool. And Key u had me thinking. Am i really a turn off to you idk what you want me to do. you want perfect and ian perfect and you know that's true but ian gon trip imma just dip. Why u claimming you have feelings for me when u dont even know the real me and i really wanna fight u bc you know i really liked you i really wanna let u got but apart of me is telling me no. idk what to do i cant tell the lies from the truth and thats deep bc youre a person...

And that's it lol

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Ok so like this was from 3 months ago and i was wondering if i should keep working on it

I dont wanna be inlove and i know tha suckyou really broke my heart should've never trust you from the start i gave u my all and u left me to fall and you know what really hurts, im stuck on you and i was nothing but true you was really with sum other girl, she makes me wanna hearl and her name was prolly pearl. When i was crying over you, you was laughing witcha dudes and i know im not trippin you had me out here looking like a fool. And Key u had me thinking. Am i really a turn off to you idk what you want me to do. you want perfect and ian perfect and you know that's true but ian gon trip imma just dip. Why u claimming you have feelings for me when u dont even know the real me and i really wanna fight u bc you know i really liked you i really wanna let u got but apart of me is telling me no. idk what to do i cant tell the lies from the truth and thats deep bc youre a person...

And that's it lol

JamesTDG · Answer

mind breaking up the paragraphs?

Trash · Answer

Yea sorry

Trash · Answer

But idk how to;-;

JamesTDG · Answer

copy/paste it and slowly hit enter for each line. at the beginning of every paragraph, hit space a few times

Trash · Answer

Otayy

@jamestdg wrote:

copy/paste it and slowly hit enter for each line. at the beginning of every paragraph, hit space a few times

Otayy

Supreme01 · Answer

@jamestdg wrote:

mind breaking up the paragraphs?

yahh just break upthe paragraphs

Supreme01 · Answer

up the*

Fan999 · Answer

It's really good so far, but if your trying to make it into a song than probably make it a little bit longer.

Trash · Answer

@fan999 wrote:

It's really good so far, but if your trying to make it into a song than probably make it a little bit longer.

Tysm💕 but i wasn't finished

Fan999 · Answer

@trash wrote:

@fan999 wrote:

It's really good so far, but if your trying to make it into a song than probably make it a little bit longer.

Tysm💕 but i wasn't finished

Don't mention it :) And oh lolll, it's still very good. Keep at it <3

Trash · Answer

@fan999 wrote:

@trash wrote:

@fan999 wrote:

It's really good so far, but if your trying to make it into a song than probably make it a little bit longer.

Tysm💕 but i wasn't finished

Don't mention it :) And oh lolll, it's still very good. Keep at it <3

Tyyyy<33 and i will

iiMaddii · Answer

It's good.But yeah make it longer, and break the paragraph. But good job

Trash · Answer

@iimaddii wrote:

It's good.But yeah make it longer, and break the paragraph. But good job

Tysm<3

iiMaddii · Answer

@trash wrote:

@iimaddii wrote:

It's good.But yeah make it longer, and break the paragraph. But good job

Tysm<3

Yw! And you can dm me for help c:

Rival · Answer

It's good so far keep up the good work!

Trash · Answer

@rival wrote:

It's good so far keep up the good work!

tysm and i will<3

kaleighh533 · Answer

This is really good like the others said theirs little minor errors with breaking up the paragraphs but once you add the other lyrics and fix your error this is to be a good song i look forward to seeing the end results...

Trash · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

This is really good like the others said theirs little minor errors with breaking up the paragraphs but once you add the other lyrics and fix your error this is to be a good song i look forward to seeing the end results...

Tysm💕

kaleighh533 · Answer

@trash wrote:

@kaleighh533 wrote:

This is really good like the others said theirs little minor errors with breaking up the paragraphs but once you add the other lyrics and fix your error this is to be a good song i look forward to seeing the end results...

Tysm💕

your welcomee <3