Question

It's been awhile since I've written poetry...
How's this?

I erase every word.
Dribbling puddles down my face.
Walking down the hallway wondering what they see..
A short blonde girl who’s nice..
Or just another player?
A girl who understands..
Or a girl who will never understand?

What do you see?
A broken box?
A girl trying to live?
You never will see the truth, because the feelings have to be locked up.
I let the heat caress me.
Knowing I won’t make it out alive.
Even with them by my side.

Answer 1

I LOVE IT GOOD JOBBB

Answer 2

Thanks. Hehe, It sure has been awhile.

Answer 3

That is really good Astrid. Nice job!

Answer 4

Thanks.

Answer 5

It is pretty good.

Answer 6

Thanks.

Answer 7

your welcome

Answer 8

(:

Answer 9

Here's a poem that I just wrote about a guy who is n longer my friend
the guy I thought was with me
turned his back, so now I see
his true self.
I put my love back on the shelf
I never thought he would do this, but
This has to stop
There has to be another way
For me the say
The things I feel every day
The emotions run through my body
Like a princess trying to catch a train
Only to see her love walk away
What goes through her mind?
Someone she worked hard to find
Her love, but he runs away, so she turns and runs to her own little island.
I don't know how he does it,
but I don't think it's worth it
to be his friend anymore.
How could he just turn away from me like that
Is he the one I should be friends with
I think not. I think I should try to ignore it,
But every damn time you cross my damn mind.
I know I should forget about you,
But I try so hard to be there for you.
You turned your back on me when I needed you most
But I wouldn't say anything to you
Because I know you'd just turn away and leave me sad and mad at myself for getting you mad. I promised to be there
But now I'm not even sure if I should breathe this air.
My chest is so tight but I have to let it go
But you were my friend so I'm still afraid to lose you
Because my love for you is so strong,
I can barely stand to look at you
Because it just makes me feel blue.

Answer 10

Really good astird, Love the detail, Keep it up :>

Answer 11

"Astird," lol, thanks.

Answer 12

Sad tho

Answer 13

you did good

Answer 14

Astrid, Thnx. Yours is good, too

Answer 15

😭 so beautiful

Answer 16

It's so awesome!!!

Answer 17

Thx lol been awhile