I am falling through the pits of hell
Cause ur love put me there
I feel this evil arising
Don’t know who is lying
I crush up my heart and become bittersweet
No more nice me no more caring
I will become ur worst enemy
Love has broken me many times
So I won’t fall I promise this time
Never knew I would be this girl
But I have no choice but to not fall for u
Love has brought me to this stage
Forgetting love is the best thing that can’t be beat
Cause I am bittersweet and don’t u dare mess with me

Question

I am falling through the pits of hell
Cause ur love put me there
I feel this evil arising
Don’t know who is lying
I crush up my heart and become bittersweet
No more nice me no more caring
I will become ur worst enemy
Love has broken me many times
So I won’t fall I promise this time
Never knew I would be this girl 
But I have no choice but to not fall for u
Love has brought me to this stage
Forgetting love is the best thing that can’t be beat
Cause I am bittersweet and don’t u dare mess with me

Holly · Answer

A poem I wrote

eeliaK · Answer

wow that is really good i love it

Holly · Answer

@eeliak wrote:

wow that is really good i love it

thank u

Sock · Answer

I like the poem :D

Holly · Answer

@sock wrote:

I like the poem :D

thank u

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

This poem is sounding kinda like a rap.

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

Rhyming the word together correctly with help you improve your poems.

NoahSux · Answer

Good poem (:

Rylee88 · Answer

Beatiful.

Holly · Answer

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:

Rhyming the word together correctly with help you improve your poems.

not all poems have to rhyme

v6mpiresk8ter · Answer

thats deep but cool

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX · Answer

damn holly i love it o:

Darfangel · Answer

@holly wrote:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:

Rhyming the word together correctly with help you improve your poems.

not all poems have to rhyme

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