Question

New song I wrote with a friend. Here we go. (There might be some errors in her typing, don't mind it.)


Depression causing
Consistent loss
Too much talking
I hate the walk
The entire hall
Seems to close around me
My eyes will fall
To the floor, they won’t see

The kids won’t know
Why I move so slow
Where I’ve been
Or where I’ll go

I will never hint to me feeling low
It’s all their fault, no friend or foe
No losses made
No gains to take

My mind requires
Things I can’t acquire
I’d call them liars
But the situation’s dire
And I’m just too tired
To keep feeling alone

it’s just basic life
I always thought
I would be fine
It’s just what I sought


How does everyone
Expect me to be great
When I don’t understand
How keep a blank slate

In the past, it was so fun
I felt like I could never be wrong
Carefree; in the night and under the sun

But it feels like now, those times are long gone
They always said you'll do great
Sadly, it's slowly slipping but only
Into a brand new place deep in my mind
That’s dark and oh, so lonely
No feelings left, no time to cry
No more to go back to what feels right
Am not holding back anymore, i cannot fight
What was there it’s been sacrificed
I’m holding on for all my life

I move too fast, no time to grieve
The feelings still move over me
Just a little longer
I will be stronger
Than what you’d ever think of me
Need you to move
Need space to breathe
I am all that I should have to prove

Music heals
Music calms
Music saves
Music can’t be wrong
Music doesn’t always mean a song
You can feel it if you would just listen

Get to know me
But none seem to dare
How I want to be
Treat me like you care
I alway seem like a puppet
Acting for a personal show
I’ll just smile like no one’s above it
If nobody’s above, then I can’t be below
It pained more to always see
It was so lifeless, so useless
Distorting me
Aboard something I could never test
Some sort of beast
I try even though I’ll never be the best

Doing something I knew would never
Get m far I knew it could have been true
Wish me nothing for good measure
We knew that there was nothing I could do
If this is here to stay, it’s fine, I’m sure

Answer 1

Ayeee now thats what i am talking about tell her to keep the flow she is soon be like me

Answer 2

IT'S VERY GOOD

Answer 3

I love it! its amazing, now let me just *steals* BHAHAHA

Answer 4

its so good tho-

Answer 5

I really like it <3 keep going

Answer 6

I LOVEEE ITTTTT

Answer 7

oo ur good at writing :)

Answer 8

I love it! You should add a tune to it and maybe sing it someday!

Answer 9

EEEEEEEEEEE its so good ^w^ keep going uwu

Answer 10

yo, its good, you got potential. Keep up the good work and maybe you can work your way up to the big leagues. Good job and good luck

Answer 11

its coool

Answer 12

Ur really good at this, I like that u collabed with a friend. I think you did really well expressing yourself, and set the tone very well. Nice job! I look forward to seeing more from you.

Answer 13

i love it <33

Answer 14

this is amazing

Answer 15

This is really good. I love it. Keep it up :)