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MemphisLee:

Even though people think my heart is a piece of stone, where i have no feelings and i only care about myself and me alone it hurts becuase i know that they are wrong Everybody saying that i have no tone like what does that even mean! Some of you wish you could be me but really in reality im just a black sheep grinding on the school to keep me steady on my feet i am readyWhen im out on my own i will need to know where to go and to watch my tone cuz im a rolling stone once i leave i aint coming back home im all my own. Yall prolly think im living the dream but really in reality im just being me whic is something you dont want to be i always live my life on the edge of a cliff like jack and jill my life is full of thrill and while im hittin the bottle my foot is stilli stopping the throttle the people that dont like me i dont like me either all this time i was sitting with a fever i am going to be gone for ever i dont even care i can feel it in the air i think its about i despair becuase i dont feel i belong here everyday people say i live in fear but i live in something other then tears i have no cheer in my life i tell u my life while u sharpen your knife yalls words are deeper then a nife stabs through the heart and i feel like im not to be on the face of this earth becuase people say all i bring is hurt i dont have any feelings and i im just the walking hell on earth i feel like im gonna disperse now its time i end this verse just think about you and you only in the universe thats how i feel......

ILOVESPAGHETTI:

This is really good, this has a lot of emotion. Nice job!

MemphisLee:

@ilovespaghetti wrote:
This is really good, this has a lot of emotion. Nice job!
Thanks

Imarieee:

This is really good. I feel the emotion behind it

MemphisLee:

@imarieee wrote:
This is really good. I feel the emotion behind it
should right one about you and my support

Imarieee:

@memphislee wrote:
@imarieee wrote:
This is really good. I feel the emotion behind it
should right one about you and my support
only if you want too

MemphisLee:

ight it will be abit before its done

axie:

Nice

Gavink7691:

nice

rachaelsbigdaddy101:

cool

afflatedAnimism:

Super good

Sharkattack123:

not bad

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