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Since we showing off our songs... lmk what you think...ik it needs work but im getting better
Dead Mans Avenue
It’s a dark and lonely place
It’s a place we all go to when we need an escape
We start to reside, get trapped inside, lose our pride and want to die
Everyones stuck in a cell
And we need a release
Sitting right next to me is a man stuck in debt
His voice is in my head saying i'm better off dying instead
But if i'm being honest I feel I’m already dead
The demons inside have torn me to shreds

Ripping me apart
Tearing me away
Crazy how it seems
We were kids just yesterday


The voices in my head are breaking my mind
For what seems like everyday
When i go to bed all i can do is cry
I wake up every morning and ask
What’s going to go wrong this time
It feels like my soul is burning alive

(Scream)
I can already feel the heat burning into my veins

Every right every wrong seeping through my bones
Remember when I used to call it my home
I’ve got to get out
But where do i start
Seems everywhere i turn I fall apart
I’m lost and I just wanna be free
The voices in my head won’t let me be
I'm just trying to be me
But the monsters in my head wont let me be
I'm on my knees trying to breath
Gasping for air
Someone please save me


Stressed out my mind
Ain't got much time
You told me you love me
I know that was a lie

Answer 1

this is wonderful i like it

Answer 2

This is really good! I applaud you.

Answer 3

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Answer 4

Wow, it's nice I👏 love it!!

Answer 5

Can I show finn???

Answer 6

love itt

Answer 7

should I post more songs?

Answer 8

too depressing bro

Answer 9

I LOVE IT

Answer 10

no problem

Answer 11

Nice

Answer 12

Very interesting, Good job

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wonderful

Answer 14

This is very good

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I like it

Answer 16

verey detailed