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Hey ive filled most of this out I really need help pleas @laylayssa

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Whatcha need help with?

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ok let me show you

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Outline Template

Complete the following outline in sentences.
You need at least two body paragraphs and the specified number of examples and explanations. If you would like to have additional paragraphs or examples and explanations, just add them to your template.
Writing Prompt:
How have these two authors expressed their relationships with nature? After reading and analyzing "The Calypso Borealis," an essay by John Muir, and William Wordsworth's poem, "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud," write an essay in which you describe how each author views nature and answer the question. Support your discussion with evidence from the text.
Hook: Two literary works best-conveyed nature in their own manner, one called "The Calypso Borealis," an essay written by John Miller called and a poem written by William Wordsworth's called "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud."


Bridge: Both authors created work that captures the beauty of nature while displaying their compassion and emotion for such beauty. They each capture the essence in their own way, one through a poem while the other through an essay, each using their own descriptive imagery to cultivate the scenery and amazement of the experience.


Thesis: William Wordsworth and John Miller not only through the diction, vocabulary, and syntax, but also through the impact of tone, and mood, and while both authors express their relationship in different ways there is still the essence of their impact on the audience.


Topic Sentence: Muir uses vivid imagery and a change of tone to show readers how nature gives him tranquility.


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Conclusion


You will write a conclusion in a later lesson and do not need to complete this part now.

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I need help with the 2 topic sentences

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Ok

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You already have 1 topic sentence, so we need to worry about finding another one.

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Ok

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So..

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Maybe make a topic sentence using something to do with "William Wordsworth's poem"?

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Like for example, "Wordsworth's poem uses _______ in order to ________ the readers."

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Ok and then after that what do I do

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You would fill in the blanks with what the poem uses and what the purpose of it is

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It's basically a model sentence

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Ok do you mind giving me an example

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Wordsworth's poem uses figurative language in order to make the poem more appealing to the readers.

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Does that help some as an example?

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yes perfect

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you know I had my doubts about this websites it looks like you guys do respond I thought I had to wait for a week

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Oh haha well thanks for the help how do I give medals

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You press a button like that-

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oh ight

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one more thing

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Yes?

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I am having trouble finding evidnce

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have you read the short story and pome

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Not yet-

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So..

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NVM

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On the first line in the first verse, it says "I wandered lonely as a cloud"-

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Ok so ille put that in as evidence

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how much will i need

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You'll probably need 1 or 2 pieces of evidence, then explain them both

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ok

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Ok thank you very much for taking time out of your day to do this I appreciate it, you don't know how much this helped fr bye. now I'm gonna go drown myself with 5 more assignments I might come back dk

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cya

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You're welcome! :)

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