Question

wrote this for my creative writing class, any options on where i should go next with this?


here it is



His eyes flicked across the table, landing on the blonde girl sitting right across from him. Her eyes rimmed red with tears and her mouth forming into a small whimper as the genuine fear began to rise in her breathing.
The key comes to a stop on the table, one end pointing to an empty chair and the other to the blonde girl whose eyes go wide.
“No…” She breaths, looking around the room, frantic yet unbelieving. “No, you can’t-” She panics.
Two large men step out of the darkness from behind her as he pushes herself out of her chair.
“You can’t!” she screams, noticing the men and trying to run away. To no avail, they grab her with force. Jasper sits there, watching as she tries to kick and scream her way out of their grasp.
“Please!” She yells desperately, “No, give me another chance!”
The blonde decides to kick one of the men, the loosened grasp on her giving her a chance to get away but not for long.

Answer 1

To be honest I think you should try an write a short novel off of this, like seriously your off to a really good start of something your writing is very detailed has its punctuations an everything that's needed if your creative enough to write this short paragraph I give you your prompts on trying to write a short novel.