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ctomk3743:

Here's my poem I'm alone in the darkness and there is no one to save me from the darkness, I get kidnapped and taking to a lab where I got turned in to a monster I ruled the world but when god saved me, he put a stop to this madness and he told me, that he would protect the world and his spirit flowed in my body and that's how my poem ends.

ctomk3743:

Its really sad

hunter3506:

this is good but you should add to it i think it is good so far good job

AiannaFLOYD:

Ayyy. Keep it up. Dont fall backwards. You are doing good. You did good on the poem. But its really sad. And I felt that fr.

ctomk3743:

Should I make more to the stroy

hunter3506:

@ctomk3743 wrote:
Should I make more to the stroy
if you think so go for it

AiannaFLOYD:

I think you should. But that's only if you want to. Nun of us can make you do something you are not to sure about. But I think you should, and if you think you should. Go for it.

ctomk3743:

Sure its going to be the longest poem

AiannaFLOYD:

Okay. Good Luck!

Sharkattack123:

this is good

AiannaFLOYD:

@sharkattack123 wrote:
this is good
It is fr. He did really good

Sharkattack123:

ok

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